【托福寫作備考】寫作訓練分析及范文（四）
新托福寫作中我們該盡量讓文章言簡意賅，用詞精準。根據(jù)國外學者的調(diào)查統(tǒng)計，一個以句號結(jié)尾的英語句子，單詞的數(shù)量最好不要超過20個，否則的話，句子偏長，聽話人的注意力有可能不集中，漏聽一、兩個單詞，從而影響對整個句子的理解。以下內(nèi)容中，我們就通過實例為大家分析托福寫作的一些經(jīng)典范文。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
參考分析：
不能同意。
確實，有些時候人們在穿著不同的情況下會有不同的行為。(舉例)
然而，決定行為因素還有很多，服裝僅僅是其中的一個因素。(羅列幾個其他的因素)
同意人們穿不同衣服的時候表現(xiàn)就不一樣
(1)在工作中穿衣服的表現(xiàn)。如西裝等等。
(2)在生活中穿衣服的表現(xiàn)。如T-SHIRT，JEANS。
(3)節(jié)日的時候，穿傳統(tǒng)的衣服，顯得對自己的傳統(tǒng)很自豪。
參考范文：
Do clothes make a man?
I do strongly support the statement that people behave differently when they wear different clothes. In other words, different clothes influence the way people behave.
Some small examples may give some light to the point. I usually find that those who wear suits and tie behave invariably the same in general. They probably look selfconfident, genteel and intelligent, although most of them do not really have these characteristics. So, what I want to emphasize here is that clothes work as a symbol today and people wear them would act like what the clothes impersonate without being aware of it. We all have the experience that when we wear a T-shirt and jeans we feel vigorous and act like a 16-yaer-old boy.
On the other hand, we tend to wear clothes that are appropriate for the environment. When people go for a job interview, men will usually wear nice suits and tie, while women will usually wear fine lady's garments. Because people understand that "clothes make a man", and nice clothes can increase their chances of getting that job.
To take this idea further, with the help of different clothes, we can behave a way that is different from what we usual look like. For example, when a serious person who has a frustrating job takes a picnic outdoors, he will dress casually in order to remind himself that he needs to relax for this occasion. Another interesting example is that we can sometimes see from movies that a serious woman who has a formal job in an office wearing a sexy underwear and dance like a stripper at night in order to seduce her husband.
So, as we can see, people really behave differently when they wear different clothes. So why not slip into casual clothes and give yourself a break right now?
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