【托福寫作備考】寫作訓(xùn)練分析及范文（三）
新托福寫作中我們?cè)摫M量讓文章言簡(jiǎn)意賅，用詞精準(zhǔn)。根據(jù)國(guó)外學(xué)者的調(diào)查統(tǒng)計(jì)，一個(gè)以句號(hào)結(jié)尾的英語(yǔ)句子，單詞的數(shù)量最好不要超過(guò)20個(gè)，否則的話，句子偏長(zhǎng)，聽話人的注意力有可能不集中，漏聽一、兩個(gè)單詞，從而影響對(duì)整個(gè)句子的理解。以下內(nèi)容中，我們就通過(guò)實(shí)例為大家分析托福寫作的一些經(jīng)典范文。
Some people enjoy change, and they look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. Compare these two approaches to life. Which approach do you prefer? Explain why.
參考分析：
可以采取it depends的策略。要看是針對(duì)什么事情，才會(huì)有具體的選擇。
選擇改變，尋找新的經(jīng)歷
(1)有了改變，有新的經(jīng)歷，才能學(xué)到更多的知識(shí)
(2)有了改變，有新的經(jīng)歷，才能認(rèn)識(shí)更多的朋友。
(3)有了改變，才會(huì)有更多的機(jī)會(huì)。如就業(yè)等等。
參考范文：
New experiences vs. usual habits
If one has never experienced the storm, how could one enjoy the beauty of the rainbow? If one has never experienced the unknown, how could one enjoy the joys that life has to offer? Therefore I always welcome new experiences in my life.
Some people like their lives to stay the same, and they do not change their usual habits. So all their life, they do not have many new experiences. They live only one lifestyle. No matter what happens in the world, they just keep their life the same way. They will not try a new job with a higher salary. For years and years they just stay with their old jobs, and live in the same town or even in the same house forever. Although some of them may want to lead a better life, they are not willing to change. They just fear changes.
We all only have one life, in other words, life is limited for every one of us, so why not take advantage of our life as much as we could? The only way to experience more is to change our usual habits and lifestyles and to try new things. For example, I have always dreamed of traveling to different parts of the world to experience different cultures and customs, to meet different people, and to enjoy different views and scenic spots. I would even live in a foreign country for a few years. Then I would really feel that I have lived a wonderful life.
Some people may say that you would have confronted much more trouble and difficulties brought by the changes in life. Yes, but life should consist of sweetness and bitterness, tears and laughter, that's the way life should be! If I haven't tasted the bitterness, then how can I appreciate the sweetness? Different experiences may help me develop a profound insight into life itself, and then I could really get to understand the real happiness of life, and really appreciate the life that I have!
In a word, I always look forward to new experiences in life, so that I could enjoy my life fully.
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