范文:Private Schools
「要求」
現(xiàn)在越來越多的民辦私立學(xué)校在中國嶄露頭角，結(jié)束了政府辦學(xué)這一單一的教育體制。請你寫一篇文章以私立學(xué)校為題展開論述。提綱如下：
越來越多的私立學(xué)校在中國建立起來，盡管發(fā)展尚不完善，并且學(xué)費(fèi)昂貴，但前景看好。
私立學(xué)校受到歡迎有其原因。
但足夠的錢并不能保證良好的教育……
「范文」
Private Schools
More and more private schools are being set up in China these days， ending the state monopoly of the country's educational system. Although private schools are still on the experimental stage and are much more expensive as compared with public schools， there is no lack of application for enrollment.
People welcome private schools for good reasons. First of all， those schools are relieving our government of part of the burdens of financing so many schools. Secondly， parents are willing to send their only child to better schools even if they costs more. And having more money than the government-funded public schools， those private schools can attract better teachers. They can also offer better environments including superior living facilities and more advanced teaching equipment.
However， adequate money doesn't guarantee good education. If not well guided and properly disciplined， the privileged young children might turn out to be new aristocrats， and therefore unfit for our highly competitive modern society.
「評語」
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