專八作文之范文賞析--校園學(xué)術(shù)造假

 

　　題目：Academic Dishonesty on Campus

　　寫作要求

　　Recent surveys show that a lot of college students download papers from the Internet to save the trouble of doing the assignments. This kind of academic dishonesty does harm to the students.

　　You are required to analyze its harmful effects and suggest some ways to prevent it.

　　Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

　　Academic Dishonesty on Campus

　　You are to write in three parts.

　　In the rst part, state speci cally what your opinion is.

　　In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion with appropriate details.

　　In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

　　Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

　　審題思路

　　本題是一道現(xiàn)象解釋說明/結(jié)果預(yù)測(cè)型的題目，要求分析學(xué)術(shù)欺騙行為可能會(huì)有什么樣的惡果，并提出預(yù)防措施 。可以從以下幾方面進(jìn)行分析 ：

　　關(guān)于結(jié)果方面：⑴ 對(duì)個(gè)人能力 、誠(chéng)信等方面不利 ；⑵ 對(duì)他人不公平，造成惡劣影響 ；可以單說一項(xiàng) ，也可以綜合起來說 。

　　關(guān)于建議方面：⑴ 事先說明這種做法的后果，進(jìn)行教育；⑵ 采取懲罰措施 。

　　范文賞析

　　Academic Dishonesty on Campus

　　It is shown in the recent surveys that many college students copy papers from the Internet to save the trouble of doing their assignments . In my opinion, this kind of academic dishonesty is very harmful to these students.

　　引言部分 ：作者先提出有學(xué)生從網(wǎng)上抄文章以完成老師布置的任務(wù)，然后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)：這種行為對(duì)學(xué)生是不利的。

　　First, copying papers from the Internet makes students lazy. Copying papers from the Internet seems easy and can save some time and trouble; seldom work hard to complete their papers on their own. In other words, students will become lazier and lazier. Second, students can learn little from copying others’ work. Students cannot improve their abilities just by downloading papers from the Internet without their own thinking and working. What’s worse, once students get used to academic cheating, they may also cheat in other cases in the future, which will be very dangerous for them, especially when it’s put down in the honesty record .

　　主體部分：作者在這里給出了三個(gè)理由：使學(xué)生變懶 ；學(xué)不到東西，破壞誠(chéng)信。這里使用 了first，second，what s worse來連接這些理由。這里的一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)是近義詞的使用，如 ：copy papers from the Internet ，academic dishonesty ，copy others work ，download papers from the internet，academic cheating 等都是表示學(xué)術(shù)舞弊行為。

　　Therefore, in order to prevent academic dishonesty on campus, some punishments by the school may be necessary. But the most important thing is that teachers should talk to those students, and make them aware of the fact that copying others’ work cannot bring them any knowledge and that only by working hard can they improve themselves.

　　總結(jié)部分：作者用therefore自然引入結(jié)論部分，提出自己的建議：需要懲罰，但更要教育。

　　亮點(diǎn)回放

　　1.save the trouble of doing sth.:“省去做某事的麻煩”；

　　2.assignment : “任務(wù)，被指定的（課外 ）作業(yè)” ；此處也可以用homework ，task等 ，但是assignment學(xué)術(shù)性更強(qiáng)些 ，在這里更恰當(dāng)。

　　3.download :“下載”；這是常用的與網(wǎng)絡(luò)相關(guān)的詞語(yǔ) ，常用 的還有upload ，copyand paste ，install ，uninstall等 。

　　4.inothercases: “在其他情況下” ；也可以用inothersituations ，onotheroccasions，under other circumstances等 。

　　5. be put down:“記下”；這里還可以用be written down ，be recorded等 。

　　6.honesty record: “誠(chéng)信記錄” ；也可以用integrity record來代替 。

　　7. talk to: 通常表示“和某人談話” ，此處暗含著“教育某人”的意思 。

　　8.only by working hard can they improve themselves: “只有通過努力他們才能有所提高” 這里使用 的是部分倒裝 的句式 。當(dāng)only，hardly，scarcely，seldom等詞放在句首時(shí)，通常要部分倒裝。

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