名師指導：2014考研英語大作文三段寫作方略三
名人代言的非模板式表達:
第二段
Obviously, the message the picture tries to convey is that celebrity endorsement could bring about potential
problems despite its many advantages. That is, without regulations, it could be used by those with bad intentions to
trick people into buying commodities that are either poor in quality or harmful to people's health.
第三段
With celebrity endorsement increasingly used by companies and manufactures in our society to promote their
products, we, as customers, should always keep a clear mind and make sensible decisions. Meanwhile, it is also
our government's responsibility to make laws and regulations for celebrity endorsement to ensure the rights of
customers and create a safe and sound environment for the development of advertising business.
“個人能力和品質”的寫作步驟
某種品質對成功很重要:
可能出現的主題詞:
1.順境與逆境(Favorable Circumstances and adverse Circumstances)
2.勤奮(hard working, diligence, painstaking efforts
3.謹慎(prudence and determination
4.堅持/毅力(perseverance persistence, determination)
5.熱情和樂觀(enthusiasm and optimism)
6.博學和求知(learnedness and seeking knowledge/pursuit of knowledge)
7.活力(vitality
8.身強體壯，充滿活力(bursting with vitality and good health
9.獨立(independence)
10.感恩(gratitude ,gratification)
11.創新(creation, innovation, critical mind, critical thinking )
12.鼓勵(encouragement)
13.真誠(sincerity )
14.寬容(humanity, love, understanding and tolerance)
15.白滿和謙遜( Being self-satisfied and being modest)
16.勇敢(courage and bravery
17.敬業精神(professional dedication and professional ethics)
18.業務水平(competence
19.苦難(suffering and hardship)
第二段的寫作:
…第一句:…
The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with creation or innovation when it comes to the cultivation
of individual characteristics./ for the personal growth.
或者:
The author of the picture attempts to convey with a certain amount of confirmation the distinctly clear
message that the spirit of creation seems to underlie almost all human successes.
或者
This human quality is part and parcel to the personal growth and its absence will definitely lead to one's poor
performance and lower achievement.
…第二句:…
Put it another way, without it, one could hardly/barely taste victory/ achieve their goal.
或者:
Put it another way, the adventure spirit is a key ingredient of the modern recipe to success, either for
individuals or for a nation.
或者:
To be sure, without the courage to engage in unknown journey and to embrace unexpected detours or
setbacks, we would have no any advance to speak of.
Fairly speaking, people or organization being able to do the next big thing must have this urge to take on the
unfamiliar or unexpected route. And, adventure spirit, which this picture highlighted, indeed constitutes one of
the wheels on which human society evolves.
…第三句:…
Due attention to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society.
或者
On my personal level, independence is truly the fundamental attribute of top performers, which separate the
high achievers from the rest of the pack.
或者:
In our era, also, this quality makes some outstanding companies or people stand out.
…第四句…
People with spirit of independence can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into
society, and even attain social status.
或者舉例:
谷歌，著名的互聯網公司，依靠其不可匹敵的產品獲得了一系列杰出的成就。正是冒險精神使這個公
司為其股東和公眾創造了巨大的價值。換句話講:如果沒有創造精神，谷歌是不可能獲得這些杰出的成就。
曼德拉的例子
版本一
曼德拉，一位巨人和偉大的英雄，由于堅信人生而平等，被殘酷的關押了27年，最終把白己的祖國改
造成了一個開放的社會，可以說是世界上最有說服力的關于堅強意志的例了，他用他一生的經歷告訴我們:
無論什么時候，無論在哪里，無論如何，面對挫折時的堅毅和面對夢想的執著都是通向成功的重要原則
版本二
Nelson Mandela, one of the most recognizable African names in history, was a man possessing unmatched
capability to endure and to forbear. He insisted on love and forgiveness despite of having been put behind bars for
27 years for his unwavering belief in human equality.
His life perfectly illustrates the importance of fortitude and perseverance in achieving goals and dreams.
曼德拉，歷史上被人記住的最有名的非洲名字，擁有無可匹敵的忍耐能力。盡管由于堅信人生而平等
而被關押了27年，卻堅信愛和寬容。他的生命完美的證明了堅毅和執著在實現目標和夢想中的重要性。
馬云的例子
版本一:
13. The success story of Ma Yun, founder of China's online trading empire--Alibaba, best
illustrates the importance of innovation in realizing personal ambition and creating value for the
society
馬云，中國電了商務帝國阿里巴巴的創始人，阿里巴巴的年銷售額已經達到白億，他的成功故事完美
的例證了在實現個人理想和為社會創造價值時，創新的重要性。
版本二:
14. Ma Yun } the creator of Taobao, who makes the most profitable day for e-commerce in the
world一Singles' Day, best illustrates the importance of innovation in realizing personal
ambition and creating value for a nation.
馬云，淘寶網這種全新的B2C商業模式的創新者，開創了全球互聯網利潤最高的網絡購物節:雙十一，
他完美地例證了在實現個人理想和為社會創造價值時，創新的重要性。
His incredible achievements originating from the critical thinking even
political heads both domestic and abroad: Li Keqiang, the Chinese premier,attracts attention
was reported to conversation with him and more company in UK. recently, British Prime Minister Cameron tried to convince and curiosity of have held close him to list his company in UK.
他那些源白于創新思維的成就甚至引起了海內外政治領袖的好奇和關注。據報道中國總理李克強都和他有親密的交談。最近，甚至英國首相都嘗試著說服他到英國開公司。
…最后一句…
In other words, were there no the spirit of ihdepehdehce, we would never taste the real happiness of the
successful life.
換句話講，要是沒有獨立的精神我們就不可能獲得成功的喜悅。
第三段的寫作:(超級無敵高尚結束段)
The picture, to some degree, makes us reflect the conventional success and enlightens us to wonder the
meaning of life and its permanent spiritual values. The spirit of independence is widely acknowledged as the
essential trait that will entitle us not only the material wealth or rank of power but also the way to make life
meaningful. So, the surest way to have a meaningful, happy life is to set goals mattering to us and to the world and
commit ourselves to striving for it with this quality.
從某種程度上講，這幅圖畫使我們去反思傳統的成功，啟發我們去探究生命的意義和那些永恒的精神
價值。獨立的精神是一種必須的品質，能使我們不僅可以獲得物質財富和權力，還能讓我們找到使生命更
有意義的道路。所以獲得幸福和充滿意義的生活的最可靠的方式就是找到對白己和對這個世界都重要的目
標，在這種精神的伴隨下，白己不斷地努力。
版本二:
To a large extent, we are compelled by this drawing to reflect on the conventional successes that take up an
inappropriately large share of our energy and time. It inspires us to explore the real essence of life and to derive
guidance from the ever-lasting moral values that truly matter.
This drawing, in a way, enlightens us on the limits of old beliefs of success, which carries much less value
than the immortal values that in deed carries weight to a man's life.
從某種程度上講，這幅圖畫使我們去反思傳統的成功，啟發我們去探究生命的意義和那些永恒的精神
價值。
版本三:
…第一句:…
任何能真正獲得幸福的人都必須具有這種精神，這種精神不僅能產生物質財富和一般意義的成功，而
且能讓我們獲得真正的有意義的人生。
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…第二句:…
所以我們必須記住:獲得幸福和充滿意義的生活的最可靠之路，開始于找到一個對白己和對這個世界都
重要的目標，我們不斷努力，我們就能最終到達幸福的終點站。
16. So, doubtless, what should be borne in our mind's is that the most reliable path
to gain access meaningful and contented life begins with setting goals mattering
both to ourselves and others，and runs ahead finally to the terminal of happiness
with our continuous devotion.
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