高考英語優秀作文賞析：2008年浙江卷1
I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. The teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the passage. That will be good for us.
However, teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so strong. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed.
Except for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in classes. It can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.
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審題是作文的第一要素，本文的審題準確無誤。無論是要點的把握還是結構的組織都證明了這一點。本文運用多種復雜句式，整體看來是不錯的。文中的一個復合句式顯示了作者的英語功底。其他出彩短語的使用也很地道，可以參看好句中的分析。
積累卡片：好詞：1.advantage n.優點2.be familiar with，對某人熟悉3. atmosphere n.氣氛
好句：1. I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks about. 我更喜歡采用雙語教學，其優點是可以更好地理解老師的話。
好處：定語從句很好地組織了復雜句，同時prefer等詞組的使用很地道。
2. Some students who wish to be taught in English will be disappointed. 那些希望英語授課的學生們可能會失望了。
好處：定語從句和wish to do的使用。
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