高考英語優秀作文賞析：2008年重慶卷2
Dear Amy,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School in China. I have got to know that you got lung cancer and are in great pain. Sorry to hear that. But since you are young, the disease wont be very serious and you can beat it. It is said that the more letters you receive, the more money the America anticancer association will donate. For every letter, they give three cents. So I will try as hard as possible to persuade my friends to write to you so as to help you get enough money to cure the disease. Im sure you will be OK soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
名師點評：
文章整體來說一氣呵成，銜接自然。通過諸如原因狀語從句的使用，使得文章內容飽滿，過渡自然，較好地使用了諸如but，so之類的連詞。文章使用了“the +比較級，the +比較級”的句式，十分出彩。
積累卡片：好詞：1. cure v.治愈2. association n.協會3.donate v.捐贈
好句：1. But since you are young, the disease wont be very serious and you can beat it. 但是因為你還比較年輕，疾病不會很嚴重，你能夠戰勝它。 好處：since，引導原因狀語從句。
2. It is said that the more letters you receive, the more money the America anticancer association will donate. 據說你收到的信越多，美國抗癌組織捐給你的錢就越多。好處：the +比較級，表示強調。
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