范文:How to Approach Money
「要求」
題目：How to Approach Money.請根據(jù)以下提示作文，要求以三句話作為段首語結(jié)構(gòu)文章。
Money is necessary in our modern life.
But money is not all good.
How should we approach money.
「范文」
How to Approach Money
Money is necessary in our modern life. We need money to buy things such as food and clothing. When we go out， we should pay traffic fee and other fees. In a word， money is important. With more money， we can live better and create better working or studying conditions.
But money is not always good. Many people work hard when they have no money but do nothing when they have more than enough money， And even worse， there are some people nowadays who make money at the expense of friendship or other people's interests.
How should we approach money， then？ In my opinion， we should work hard to earn more money， But at the same time， we must remember that money is not our final goal.
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「評語」
本文為一給起首句的作文，所以內(nèi)容限制很大，個人發(fā)揮余地較小。本文優(yōu)點在于簡練地評論了金錢的利與弊，邏輯清楚。此類文章寫作起來比較容易。
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