范文:The advantages of private tutoring
「要求」
高校大學生最大的勤工儉學來源是家教，很多中小學生都有家教。這是為什么呢？這又說明什么呢？請寫出你的看法。
「范文」
The advantages of private tutoring
A recent study shows that about 80% of pupils have private tutors. Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents， for various reasons， missed the chance to obtain a good education. so when their children have difficulty with their school work， they are helpless.
Private tutoring is a good solution. As private tutoring is usually one-on-one， the teacher knows the strengths as well as the weaknesses of the pupil， and teaching is， in most cases， directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils.
「評語」
看了事實然后進行分析，試圖從邏輯上推出前因后果，而這些又都需要事實來證明。這個命題是開放性的，大家完全可以各抒已見。本文清晰嚴謹地表達了自己的看法；缺點是只看到有益的一面，略顯單薄。
When teaching a lesson， the teacher reads his student continuously， and change the subject if he is losing the audience.
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