范文:Decision
「要求」
有人認(rèn)為“就算作出了錯誤的決定，也比遇事沒有主意好得多！”你同意嗎？請寫出充足的理由表明你的觀點。
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「范文」
Decision
A person's journey through life might be seen as a series of decisions for the better and for the worse. So making a decision is a most important thing in a person's life. I follow the reasoning that when a person is in dilemma， it's usually best to do something. Moreover， when a person genuinely tries to change his circumstances， a bad decision can turn out for the better.
Scientists are often aware of the problems of decision making. Einstein was deeply concerned about the destructive effects of the “miracle ”of nuclear power. Yet the scientists of his generation also saw the potential benefits of nuclear energy. Like many scientists， he believed that the decision to create――to strive for progress――is the purpose of learning. Theories of scientific progress rest on the assumption that an invention or discovery will produce more good than evil.
So I support the statement that it is better to make a wrong decision than to make none at all.
「評語」
文章開篇點題，闡明了“作出決定”在一生中的重要性，接下來又從科學(xué)的角度，點明“作出決定”在科學(xué)研究中的作用，從而支持了文章的論點：“就算作出了錯誤的決定，也比遇事沒有主意好得多！”結(jié)尾再一次點題，以總結(jié)全文，呼應(yīng)開篇。
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