交往的事我首次與外國人接觸-My First Meeting with a Foreigner
我首次與外國人接觸
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根據下列要點寫一篇記敘文：
①上個星期天你去了一趟無錫市。你走進一家縫紉店，那里正在舉辦時裝展覽。②你看見一名中年的外國男子，正在向一名女店員打手勢。③這位男子不懂漢語，女店員不懂英語。她把價格寫在紙上，外賓也看不懂。④你走上前問過店員一件襯衣多少錢后，用英語轉告外賓148元一件。⑤他覺得太貴，問能否降價。店員答應降為120元，他一下子就買了10件。⑥他離開前送給你一支很好的鋼筆。你感謝他，并歡迎他再來。
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My First Meeting with a Foreigner
胡德青
Last Sunday I went to the city of Wuxi. When I entered a tailor＇s shop, I found there were lots of people because there was a fashion show①.Suddenly I noticed that a middle-aged foreigner was gesticulating② to a saleswoman and pointing to a new shirt. It was clear that he wanted to buy the shirt, but he did not know the price, for he did not know Chinese. And the saleswoman did not know English. Though she wrote the price on the paper, he was still puzzled.
When I saw this, I went up to them. I asked the saleswoman the price of the shirt first and then I said to the foreigner in English, “One hundred and forty-eight yuan.” Hearing this he said to me, “Oh, thank you! But it＇s too expensive. Would you please ask her if she can make it cheaper? If she can , I will buy ten.” I told her what he said , and she agreed. In the end the foreigner paid 1,200 yuan for ten shirts.
Before he left, he gave me a nice pen. I thanked him and said to him , “Welcome to our city . Good-bye!”
（選自胡德康《高三英語緊扣最新教材同步到課》）
【詞語解釋】
①fashion [＇f$M n] show 時裝展覽②gesticulate [dNes＇tikjuleit] v．（講話時等）做手勢；用姿勢（或動作）示意
【寫法指要】
本文作者采用順序手法，記敘了第一次與外國人交談的經過。全文基本包括了記敘文的六要素：時間（on Sunday），地點（a tailor＇s shop），人物（a foreigner，a saleswoman，and I），事件（help a foreigner in buying a shirts），原因（The saleswoman could not speak English and the foreigner could not speak Chinese．）和結果（All were satisfied．）。層次分明，交待清楚。全文可分為6個行為情節：1）我去逛商店；2）看見外國人向店員打手勢；3）雙方語言不通；4）我上前翻譯；5）外國人買了10件襯衣；6）外國人送我小禮物，我感謝。
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