上海中考英語(yǔ)作文范文三
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I want to invent a kind of medicine
If you ask me what I want to invent? I will say a kind of medicine which can cure cancer.As we all know, many people suffer from cancer and die at a very young age these years. For this, countless families lost their beloved family members, then feel painful for the rest of their lives. What a terrible thing it is! So, doing something quickly for them is rather necessary, I’d like to devote my life to it!
精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：
亮點(diǎn)一：條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主將從現(xiàn)，引出中心思想。
亮點(diǎn)二：at a very young age 在年輕時(shí)。
亮點(diǎn)三：beloved 摯愛(ài)的。
亮點(diǎn)四：for the rest of their lives 余生。
亮點(diǎn)五：What a terrible thing it is! 感嘆句表達(dá)這種病的嚴(yán)重性。
亮點(diǎn)六：So, doing something quickly for them is necessary! 主語(yǔ)從句結(jié)尾，句式新穎，點(diǎn)明主題。
亮點(diǎn)七： devote one’s life to … 把…獻(xiàn)給，強(qiáng)烈表明作者的決心。
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