托福寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)料庫(kù)之競(jìng)技體育給人們生活的經(jīng)驗(yàn)

在托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作考試的時(shí)候，想要在短短的考試時(shí)間內(nèi)，找到文章最好的切入點(diǎn)，其實(shí)并不是那么容易的。所以，在備考過(guò)程中，我們的寫(xiě)作練習(xí)，并不需要把所有的文章進(jìn)行完整的練習(xí)，而是要就題庫(kù)中的文章都建立好明確的論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)。現(xiàn)在，我們就為大家?guī)?lái)是否同意競(jìng)技體育教給人們生活的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，希望能為大家能為大家的寫(xiě)作備考帶來(lái)幫助。

【觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)】：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：playing sports teaches people lessons about life. 競(jìng)技體育教給人們生活的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，是否同意?

【作家立場(chǎng)】：競(jìng)技體育僅僅是傳授人生經(jīng)驗(yàn)的一種渠道，旅行，獨(dú)立生活，以及其他很多方式還可以傳授人生經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

【思路拓展】：

1. 生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)的學(xué)習(xí)包括：戀愛(ài)技巧、家務(wù)管理能力、危機(jī)處理能力、自我保護(hù)意識(shí)、適應(yīng)能力、生存能力等。

2. 從競(jìng)技體育中可以獲得的人生成長(zhǎng)：不懈追求完美、團(tuán)隊(duì)精神、合作意識(shí)、競(jìng)爭(zhēng)意識(shí)、失敗后的奮起等。

3. 其他可以增長(zhǎng)人生經(jīng)驗(yàn)的方式：廣泛游歷、出國(guó)留學(xué)、自我創(chuàng)業(yè)等。

【文章布局】：

首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

二段：第一次支持作家立場(chǎng)

三段：第二次支持作家立場(chǎng)

四段：讓步對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)的合理性 + 反駁其不合理性

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn) + (總結(jié)理由)

【語(yǔ)料庫(kù)】：

1. impart life lessons v傳授生活的經(jīng)驗(yàn)

2. The relentless pursuit of perfection 不懈追求完美

3. teamwork spirit n團(tuán)隊(duì)精神

4. love-affair skills = love-affair techniques n戀愛(ài)技巧

5. household management ability n家務(wù)管理能力

6. self-protection awareness = self-protection awareness consciousness n自我保護(hù)意識(shí)

7. sports events n體育運(yùn)動(dòng)

8. sportsmanship n競(jìng)技體育精神

9. demonstrate= show v 展示

10. enlarging one’s circle of friends v擴(kuò)大交友圈

11. co-ordination n協(xié)調(diào)能力

12. strategies n策略

13. the acquisition of life wisdom n人生智慧的獲得

14. might be seduced into doing sth v 被誘惑做……

15. consumption trap n消費(fèi)陷阱

16. A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一塹，長(zhǎng)一智

17. crucial competences = valuable abilities n重要的能力

18. living in a homestay family v 住在寄宿家庭里

19. cultivate one’s viabilities v培養(yǎng)一個(gè)人的生存能力

20. It is not the sole channel = It is not the only way 這不是唯一的方式

【原創(chuàng)范文】：

{首段｝：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

Currently，the awareness of healthier lifestyle enables increasing numbers of people to pay closer attention to physical exercise. A great many people are fond of watching various sports competition or just diving into diverse physical activities. However, people have been debating，for many years， whether or not sports events could help people to acquire more knowledge about life. To voice my opinion, sports could greatly conduce to enriching one’s experience of the world in some aspects, but not in all fields.

解析：Sports could greatly conduce to enriching one’s experience of the world in some aspects, but not in all fields. 競(jìng)技體育，在一些方面，極其有助于豐富人的閱歷，但是，不是在所有領(lǐng)域。

{二段｝：第一次支持作家立場(chǎng)

For a start，not all the life experiences could be learnt by participating in sports events, the acquisition of life experience still comes from many other channels. One possible way is via traveling. A case in point is that one might be seduced into buying those fake or unqualified goods and thus fall into various consumption traps during the process of taking part in the tour organized by travel agency. However, a fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. One’s self-protection awareness could be raised after the unpleasant and bitter experiences.

解析：However, a fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 然而，吃一塹長(zhǎng)一智。

{三段｝：第二次支持作家立場(chǎng)

This debate reminds me of my own story. Another crucial ability every individual has to learn is the independent viability. Studying abroad is an effective way for people to develop and cultivate their competences. To illustrate，I stayed in a homestay family in the USA in the summer vacation of 2012, I had to deal with a number of housework by myself such as tidying up the room, doing the washing or cooking for myself. This experience greatly trained my adaptability and viability.

解析：This experience greatly trained my adaptability and viability. 這段經(jīng)歷極大地鍛煉了我的適應(yīng)能力和生存能力。

{四段｝：讓步對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)的合理性

Indeed， I have to concede that a sea of life experiences, wisdoms and the philosophy of life could be acquired through taking part in sports activities. After all, every sports event has its own charm. Take basketball as an example, every individual including spectators to players could benefit from the performance they appreciate or demonstrate such as the teamwork spirit, co-operation and the spirit of never giving up halfway. Imaginably , these skills can help them in their later lives and also in their further careers. Likewise, the constant efforts after each failure in sports competition could inspire people to brave new challenges. What I want to rebut that, however, is that there are still wisdoms or lessons that could not be obtained by sports events.

解析：What I want to rebut that, however, is that there are still wisdoms or lessons that could not be obtained by sports events. 但是，我想要反駁的是：有些智慧和經(jīng)驗(yàn)是不能通過(guò)體育運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)的。

{尾段｝：再次亮明觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)理由

In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that although lessons about life could be taught by sports competition, it is not the sole channel. Traveling or living alone and many other ways still have a key role to play in imparting life lessons.

解析：Traveling or living alone and many other ways still have a key role to play in imparting life lessons. 旅行，獨(dú)立生活，其他很多方式還可以傳授人生經(jīng)驗(yàn)。

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