規(guī)避托福寫作小瑕疵 優(yōu)化文章內(nèi)容
托福寫作中，注重的是整體的思維邏輯與表能力，雖然不拘小節(jié)，但整體行文上如果語(yǔ)言疏漏較多，分?jǐn)?shù)肯定還是會(huì)受到影響的。這樣的話，即使主題和邏輯很好，分?jǐn)?shù)上也不會(huì)呈現(xiàn)為高分。托福范文TOEFL寫作欄目為同學(xué)們匯總了幾個(gè)個(gè)常見的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤和例子，希望同學(xué)們格外注意，避免這些錯(cuò)誤在自己托福寫作中的出現(xiàn)。
用詞不當(dāng)
The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.
評(píng)：groupwork是“分組”或者“小組集體任務(wù)”的意思。應(yīng)改為teamwork“團(tuán)隊(duì)合作”，用詞不當(dāng)而導(dǎo)致表達(dá)出來(lái)的意思就風(fēng)馬牛不相及了。
You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.
評(píng)：dangerous表示所修飾的對(duì)象是“帶來(lái)危險(xiǎn)的，有危險(xiǎn)性的”，而be in danger才是“身處險(xiǎn)境”的意思。到底誰(shuí)才是威脅呢?
Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development.
評(píng)：模樣長(zhǎng)得像，意思可不同了。這里想用動(dòng)詞affect表示“影響”，卻誤寫為名詞effect“效果”，一字千里啊!
搭配錯(cuò)誤
Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent.
評(píng)：這位同學(xué)顯然記錯(cuò)了be crazy about sth. 這個(gè)用法，寫出來(lái)的句子自然會(huì)出問題啦。
Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.
評(píng)：此處是一個(gè)明顯的動(dòng)賓搭配錯(cuò)誤。“提高……技巧”應(yīng)該是improve the skills，而不是increase the skills.
詞性錯(cuò)位
I will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study.
評(píng)：sad是形容詞，而這里明顯需要一個(gè)名詞，應(yīng)該是sadness。
Although making money is a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant.
評(píng)：形容詞significant前需要用副詞來(lái)修飾，所以equal應(yīng)該改成equally。
時(shí)態(tài)混亂
Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.
評(píng)：過去時(shí)的句子中冒出了現(xiàn)在時(shí)，同學(xué)你太粗心了，要仔細(xì)檢查哦。
I would explain my view in the following paragraphs.
評(píng)：應(yīng)該改為would like或是will，這兩種說(shuō)法混合使用導(dǎo)致把時(shí)態(tài)上的混亂。
通過以上幾個(gè)例子，希望同學(xué)們可以舉一反三，在托福寫作練習(xí)和考試中都不要出現(xiàn)這些錯(cuò)誤。
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