2016年考研英語作文任性拿高分：道歉信類文章
道歉信通常包括以下內容：表示歉意;道歉的緣由;出現差錯的原因;提出彌補措施;請求原諒。
道歉信的寫作策略：表示道歉--說明具體原因、提出補救辦法--再次致歉，希望得到理解。
寫道歉信的語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實，不要顯出絲毫的虛情假意。好的道歉信不僅會取得對方的諒解，還會增進彼此的感情。在寫作過程中，盡可能提供比較合理的理由。如果違反生活常識將導致扣分。在解釋完原因后，盡量提供一個合適的補救辦法，使行文更加圓滿。
【相關真題】
Directions:
You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to
1) make an apology, and
2) suggest a solution.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.Do not write the address. (10 points)
【范文】
Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I have come back from Canada and I found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.
The CD which I borrowed from you is made in Canada, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find the similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【試題分析和點評】
從本年的題目要求來看，考生需要根據假設的語境，給加拿大的房東寫一封致歉信，主要包括兩方面的內容：1)對自己帶走音樂光盤表示歉意;2)提出解決的辦法。以書面形式表達歉意應注意如下幾點：
1)明確、簡要地陳述你感到抱歉的某件事。
2)提出補救的辦法，表明你的補救意圖或方案。假如你不能確定哪種補救辦法更合適，可提出多個可選辦法。
3)向對方保證此類事情不會再發生。
4)態度真誠但不宜言過其實，避免使用過分夸張、自責的表達，如：I am very, very, very sorry…;I wish I were dead after the way I behaved last night…等;寫信時要注意語境，選擇合適的語域，言簡意賅，避免使用勉強的語氣，要用誠懇、請愿的語氣表達歉意。
5)信中不宜把自己的過錯歸咎于別人(如同事、郵局等)或設備(如計算機、傳真等)。
6)假如過錯或過失不是因為個人所致，而是公司或團體，不宜貿然承認該過錯是公司疏忽所致。最好征求公司律師意見后再書面表達歉意。
所選的該篇范文很好地完成了試題規定的任務，既簡明地陳述了自己的失誤，又提出了兩個解決的辦法。內容要點完整，層次清晰，語氣得體，語言流暢，格式恰當，符合語域要求。但也有少數的語法錯誤，如：Yesterday I have come back from Canada…。得分9分。
【道歉信開頭常用句式和套話】
I am writing to apologize for…
I am very sorry to say that…
Please accept my sincere apology for…
【道歉信結尾常用句式和套話】
Please allow me to say sorry again.
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
I am sorry that I can't…and trust that you will be able to understand.
英語作文是典型的慢工出細活，日積月累，方能有成。祝各位考生能夠按照自己的計劃踏踏實實走好每一步，堅持不懈地到達理想的彼岸。
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