考研英語小作文批改：感謝信8-10分例文2
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考研英語復習資料：考研英語作文范文批改，考研頻道編輯整理。
考研英語待批改作文：
8-10分
第二篇
Dear Eleven，
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my Olympic Game in Maths. I fear that I would have been give it up early.
Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Eleven，
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my （加上study of）Olympic Game in Maths（奧數(shù)是Mathematic Olympiad ）. I fear that I would have been give（改為giving） it up early.
Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
8分
同學你好，這篇小作文整體來講寫的不錯。建議你如果遇到某些不確定但又不是非常重要的專有名詞，可以改為其他有把握的詞，例如本篇作文中提到的奧數(shù)，完全可以改為其他的比賽。
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8-10分
第二篇
Dear Eleven，
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my Olympic Game in Maths. I fear that I would have been give it up early.
Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英語作文批改點評如下：
Dear Eleven，
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your encouragement to me. If it had not been for your assistance in my （加上study of）Olympic Game in Maths（奧數(shù)是Mathematic Olympiad ）. I fear that I would have been give（改為giving） it up early.
Every one agrees that it was you who encouraged me to persist on the game all the time and always helped me make a lot of preparations for the game, so I had the confidence in myself and won the game at last. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
8分
同學你好，這篇小作文整體來講寫的不錯。建議你如果遇到某些不確定但又不是非常重要的專有名詞，可以改為其他有把握的詞，例如本篇作文中提到的奧數(shù)，完全可以改為其他的比賽。
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