2017年11月25日雅思寫作Task1原創(chuàng)小作文范文
為大家?guī)碜钚?017.11.25場的雅思寫作小作文范文，本場考試的小作文為流程圖，題目為：The diagram below describes how to change organic waste into garden fertilizers. Describe the process.以下為范文及范文解析：
1.范文解析:本題是流程圖，程序步驟不算繁雜，考生需要根據(jù)階段特征合理分段，注意表示階段的銜接詞的使用要靈活多樣和準確，時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時較多，恰當使用被動語態(tài)可以使得文章表述更客觀，注意總結(jié)整個圖。
2.小站原創(chuàng)雅思小作文范文
The flow chart illustrates the process by which organic waste are converted into garden manure.
It is noticeable that five stages are shown on the diagram. The processes begin with preparing equipment and end at spreading compost materials.
At the initial stage, a plastic container which is about two cubic meters can be used and the cover on the top of it should be kept sealed. Meanwhile, drilling some holes enables air to pass through the device. After that, waste materials including food, grass and newspaper are put into the container layer by layer, of which the depth is the same with 15 centimeters.
At the third stage in the process, the materials are mixed with moderate nitrogen and water is added to keep sufficient moisture before placing the container on hot weather condition. Then, gases escape from the holes after the device is heated by hot weather. Finally, six months later, compost ingredients and worms are produced into high-quality fertilizers which could be spread on gardens.字數(shù) 167 words
范文原創(chuàng)自小站葉瑜琪老師
3.高分表達
be converted into 轉(zhuǎn)換成為
garden manure 花園肥料
It is noticeable that…… 顯著的是..
At the initial stage 最開始階段
After that 之后
layer by layer, 逐層
At the third stage in the process 第三階段
are mixed with 被混合
high-quality fertilizers 優(yōu)質(zhì)肥料
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