2017年10月28日雅思寫作A類大作文原創范文

大作文

類型

社會類

題目

Today, people in many countries choose to work and live wherever they like thanks to communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

范文解析

本題探討了自由選擇工作場所和居住地方的利弊。考生在拓展論點的步驟中應該不會存在疑惑或者阻礙，因為該話題比較日常。此外，詞匯上也有比較多的發揮余地。總體來說，這道題目的難度系數并不大。

文章結構

paragraph 1 :結合時代背景引入話題且表明自己的觀點。

paragraph 2: 論述自由選擇工作場所的優勢。（分為在家辦公和旅行辦公兩個層面）

paragraph 3: 論述自由選擇住所的好處。（分為住在國內和國外兩個層面）

paragraph 4: 總結上文論點，通過讓步承認缺點，強調自己的觀點。

高分話題表達（范文中已用紅色標注）

owing to

歸功于…

the advance of

…的發展

be granted chances to

被賦予…的機會

relieve from daily commutes

從日常上下班中解放出來

traffic congestion

交通阻塞

rush hours

高峰期

working schedule

工作日程

homeworker

在家工作的人

attend fitness class

參加健身課程

be subjected to

受到，經受…

spark inspiration and creativity

激發靈感和創造性

historical relics

歷史遺跡

humanistic environment

人文環境

mountainous areas

山區

coastal city

沿海城市

refreshing and enlightening

使人耳目一新的有啟發作用的

not to mention

更不用說

elevate skills

提高技能

feel isolated from the society

感覺和社會脫節

change dwellings

變換住所

boost working efficiency

提高工作效率

enrich people’s life experience

豐富個人經歷

高分結構（范文中已用藍色標注）

As far as I am concerned, this tendency does lead to several desirable results.

在我看來，這個趨勢產生了一些令人滿意的結果

Without…，hardly can…

沒有…的話，…是不行的

although there is a concern that

盡管有…的

范文

Owing to the convenience of modern means of transportation and the advance of communication technology, a growing number of people are granted chances to choose their ideal workplaces and residence. As far as I am concerned, this tendency does lead to several desirable results.

The most obvious is that employees can be relieved from daily commutes. The long-distance communication as well as the internet technology provides conditions for staff to work at home, in which case, there is no need to spend hours on the way to offices, and suffer from the traffic congestion in rush hours. Additionally, a flexible working schedule maintains the balance between career and life. Instead of sitting in a certain room, dealing with assignment for fixed time frame, homeworkers can do exercise or attend fitness class in the morning; contact with clients and complete plans for projects in the afternoon. Obviously, under such a circumstance, it is less likely for them to be subjected to huge stress from work, but increase their general satisfaction with life. Furthermore, this working pattern sparks inspiration and creativity especially for writers and designers. Without being immersed in the wonder of nature or deeply appreciating the glamour of historical relics, hardly can they create masterpieces.

Undeniably, residing places people prefer to generate some merits and the first one is to experience diverse landscapes and appealing humanistic environment of other regions. Imagine that how exciting for people from mountainous areas living in a coastal city. Besides, artistic projects such as sculptures, public art and lifestyles of local people enable newcomers to experience something refreshing and enlightening. Not to mention those who live abroad, their foreign language skills can be elevated and horizons of culture can be broadened.

In conclusion, although there is a concern that people may feel isolated from the society and live in an unstable life if working at home for longer period or changing dwellings too often, I firmly believe that this modern way of work and life boost working efficiency and enrich people’s life experience.

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