2017年9月30日雅思寫作考試大作文范文

In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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本文是一篇教育類和科技類結(jié)合的題目。近年來(lái)，話題之間的交叉和結(jié)合已經(jīng)成為趨勢(shì)，同學(xué)們要注意。題目中給出的是一種現(xiàn)象，由于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的出現(xiàn)，人們可以在家工作或上大學(xué)。題目問(wèn)的是這種趨勢(shì)的好處是否大于壞處。

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In some countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, with the advance of technology, people have easy access to the Internet, which makes working or studying at home realizable. From my point of view, I believe the merits of this trend outweigh the demerits.

The first and most immediate concern that comes to people’s mind is that excessive exposure to computers is detrimental to people’s health. To be specific, for many people, for example, students, they may spend their leisure time playing computer games or watching TV and in this case, if they study at home through the internet, sitting in front of the screen for hours, it may give rise to a range of health problems like myopia and obesity.

However, there are more benefits. The most obvious advantage is saving time. The traffic is becoming increasingly crowded these days and it costs working people amounts of time on the road. If they can work at home, commuting will not be a problem and people can use the time saved to develop their personal interests, which can contribute to the well-being of individuals.

Apart from this, it is more flexible to work or study at home.

For students, instead of attending lectures and seminars at fixed time, they can download them from the internet and watch them whenever they have time and energy. For people in the workplace, they do not have to wear suits or high heels all day; they can wear casual and comfortable clothes when working.

In conclusion, although people may suffer from some illnesses, this problem can be remitted through some physical activities in the weekends and at the same time, working or studying at home does boost efficiency and brings convenience to both students and employees.

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the widespread use of ………的廣泛使用

outweigh比……重要;超過(guò)

the advance of technology科技的進(jìn)步

realizable可實(shí)現(xiàn)的

the merits of ………的長(zhǎng)處

demerit短處，缺點(diǎn)

excessive exposure to computers過(guò)度接觸電腦

be detrimental to …對(duì)……有害

leisure time業(yè)余時(shí)間，閑暇時(shí)間

give rise to造成，引起

myopia and obesity近視和肥胖

commuting通勤

personal interests個(gè)人興趣;個(gè)人利益

be remitted through …通過(guò)……使……緩和

bring convenience to …給……帶來(lái)便利

From my point of view，…在我看來(lái)，……

The first and most immediate concern that comes to people’s mind is that …人們最先想到最迫切的擔(dān)憂是……

To be specific，…具體來(lái)說(shuō)，……

The most obvious advantage is …最明顯的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是……

Apart from this，…除此之外，……

it is more flexible to ………更靈活

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