雅思寫(xiě)作高分范文精讀系列之report發(fā)展類(lèi)：平均壽命的影響

Task

In many countries, average life expectancy has been increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and for society as a whole? Suggest some solutions.

在很多國(guó)家，平均壽命在不斷增加。這將對(duì)個(gè)人和整個(gè)社會(huì)引起什么樣的問(wèn)題?提些建議。

經(jīng)典傳送：劍橋雅思3-11寫(xiě)作考官9分范文匯總傳送

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參考范文

As the medical care system and technology are developing rapidly in modern society, people’s average expectancy has been increasing. The longevity of people may bring side effects to individuals and the whole society such as aging population. Some solutions will be given to solve those problems caused by the increasing life expectancy.

Increasing life expectancy means bigger proportion of older people in the population than before. This may result in fiercer employment pressure for young people and emotional emptiness for the senior citizens. Before those senior employees retire, young people will find it difficult to replace their positions because of the lacking working experience compared to the older ones. For the retirees, because of the increasing number of aging people and employment pressure for their children, there will be more and more empty-nest elderly people who cannot receive spiritual consolation from the younger generation.

Aging population brought by the longevity of people can also have negative effects on the society. Because the senior citizens retire from the working world, they no longer provide sufficient labor for the sustained economic growth of the society and the aging laborers turn into pure wealth consumers. Moreover, the elderly are not as innovative and energetic as the young people, so there will be less chance for the whole society to make a breakthrough to challenge the established traditions and change the status quo.

To solve those problems, I believe the government should release the policy to arrange more young talented people to succeed the experienced laborers and empower the older employees to offer constructive suggestions. Therefore, the younger generation may face less heavy financial burden and spend more quality time with the elderly people. The company should cultivate the corporation culture to encourage young employees to put forward creative ideas to make a difference to the current conditions.

解題思路

這道題是要求學(xué)生分析人民的平均壽命增加，將導(dǎo)致的問(wèn)題以及解決辦法，屬于IELTS作文考試中要求分析原因/問(wèn)題和解決方案的Report題型。這類(lèi)題一般需要些2個(gè)主題段，主體段一分析兩到三個(gè)原因，主體段二則是對(duì)應(yīng)的給出幾個(gè)解決方案。

思路參考：本篇范文用了四段來(lái)完成report文體的指令，305詞左右，句式結(jié)構(gòu)非常出色，從句、句句之間的連接轉(zhuǎn)折，用的非常地道嫻熟，通篇讀下來(lái)，十分流暢，值得大家借鑒。

主體段1：對(duì)個(gè)人(年輕人、老人)的不利

主體段2：對(duì)社會(huì)的弊端

主體段3：針對(duì)以上對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)的弊端，提出相應(yīng)解決措施。

類(lèi)似話題

1.In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?

2.The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people， but some people say that young people can also be a leader, to what extent do you agree or disagree?(2015/1/10)

3.Some people believe that older generation’s traditional ideas are not the right way to live, think and behave in modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2008/01/19)

4.In many countries, workers over 60 can still be found in the workplace. However, some people think it may cause some social problems and they should get retired. To what extent do you agree or disagree? .(2010/6/26)

重點(diǎn)詞匯

1.longevity n.壽命

2.bring side effects to 帶來(lái)負(fù)面影響

3.emotional emptiness 精神空虛

4.spiritual consolation 精神安慰

5.release the policy 頒布法令

6.succeed the experienced laborers 這里的succeed是繼任的意思

7.fiercer employment pressure 愈加激烈的就業(yè)壓力

8.empty-nest elderly people 空巢老人

9.the sustained economic growth of the society社會(huì)經(jīng)濟(jì)的持續(xù)增長(zhǎng)

10.make a breakthrough to challenge the established traditions and change the status quo 找到挑戰(zhàn)現(xiàn)有世俗和改變現(xiàn)狀的突破點(diǎn)

11.constructive suggestions 建設(shè)性意見(jiàn)

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