【高分語(yǔ)料庫(kù)】雅思寫(xiě)作環(huán)保類(lèi)——廢物利用
In many countries, there is no enough recycling of waste materials (eg. paper, glass, cans).What are the reasons and how to solve it ? 很多國(guó)家，廢料的循環(huán)利用不盡如人意，原因何在，如何解決?
【頭腦風(fēng)暴】
廢料處置以及再循環(huán)利用，比較日本和中國(guó)，日本做的更好：分類(lèi)處理生活垃圾，人們有環(huán)保意識(shí)，節(jié)能意識(shí)，廢料對(duì)于環(huán)境的污染很少，廢料得到充分的循環(huán)利用。相反，中國(guó)做得不盡如人意。有些人缺乏環(huán)保意識(shí)，媒體的宣傳力度不足，政府對(duì)于亂丟生活的垃圾的現(xiàn)象也沒(méi)有明確的規(guī)范。同時(shí)，廢料處理基地和廢料處理技術(shù)也有待改善。
【范文賞析】
{首段}：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 寫(xiě)作目的
Recycling the waste and developing regenerated materials is a link that is essential for the national economic construction. Alarmingly, it is not rare to see that litterbugs almost appear in every corner of individual city. Even worse, the failure to properly recycling wastes will pose a threat to the sustainable development of natural resources. This essay aims to ascertain the reasons and solutions.
【解析】
1. Recycling the waste and developing regenerated materials is a link that is essential for the national economic construction.收舊利廢，發(fā)展再生資源是國(guó)民經(jīng)濟(jì)建設(shè)中一個(gè)不可缺少的環(huán)節(jié)。
2. Alarmingly, it is not rare to see that litterbugs almost appear in every corner of individual city. 令人擔(dān)憂(yōu)的是，每個(gè)城市的每個(gè)地區(qū)幾乎都有亂扔垃圾的人。
3. The failure to properly recycling wastes will pose a threat to the sustainable development of natural resources. 不能有效地循環(huán)垃圾會(huì)對(duì)于自然資源的可發(fā)展造成嚴(yán)重的威脅。
【亮點(diǎn)】
1. is essential for 對(duì)于……是重要的
2. it is not rare to see that …… 很常見(jiàn)的是……
3. pose a threat to …… 對(duì)……造成威脅
{二段}：人們?yōu)楹挝茨軓U料循環(huán)利用
Indeed, what some people are doing is wasting precious natural resources and disposing of garbage randomly. The reasons why recycling waste materials leaves much to be desired are not far to seek. First, some cities fail to establish enough recycling sites to collect and tackle waste materials. Meanwhile, some countries lack efficient techniques in terms of waste treatment. Another major reason is that some people have little knowledge about how to deal with life waste or they simply lack eco-friendly consciousness.
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