高考英語：如何寫好英語段落2
2014年高考英語考試已經結束，新一輪的高考復習又將開始。面臨2015年高考，考生應該如何復習高考英語這個考試科目呢？高考網匯總整理《高考英語：如何寫好英語段落2》，供2015年高考考生參考。
Most students of our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical works near our school. We think it will do us great harm than good. The drinking water will be polluted.
這個段落展開不夠。該段落談論的是“反對在學校附近建造化工廠”的問題，但是后面的說明太單薄，不夠具體全面，特別是根據“在學校附近修建化工廠”，理應簡單談談修建化工廠對學校的影響。請看下文：
Most students of our school, including me, are against the construction of a chemical works near our school. Although the works will make a lot of money for our city, we think it will do us great harm than good. The drinking water will be polluted, and this will do great harm to the people and animals around it. Also it will make a lot of noise, which will disturb the atmosphere of the study. We need quiet places to study. Last, the air over the city will be polluted too. We will never be able to breathe fresh air. How can we live here any longer?
這樣發展句分三個層次來談論“反對在學校附近修建化工廠”的原因：先點明“弊大于利”，然后從其所帶來的水污染、噪音污染和空氣污染三個方面進行說明，最后以一個強有力的問句結尾，發人深思。因此，這個片段就更充實、具體，說理更透徹。(from www.nmet168.com)
說明主題的方式有很多，但不論是哪一種方式擴展細節，都必須為主題服務，能夠突出主題。不相關的擴展句則會影響段落的統一性，給讀者理解造成障礙。如：
We like our English teacher. He is 36 years old. He is strict with us in everything and he is strict with himself, too. He has a good way of making his classes lively and interesting and his lessons are not easily forgotten. Sometimes he is angry with us, and we are afraid of him. He always leaves us a lot of homework to do. If we haven’t finished it, he will tell us to stand face to face at the back of the classroom.
擴展句應該圍繞主題組織材料，上面這個段落可說是一個失敗的段落。該段落使用了主題句：We like our English teacher. 按理來說下面的擴展句應該圍繞這個主題來組織材料，但后面幾個句子：Sometimes he is angry with us and we are afraid of him. He always leaves us a lot of homework…直到最后都與主題無關，應該刪掉?；蛄砥鹨欢?，寫這個老師的另一方面。
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