高考英語優(yōu)秀作文賞析：2008年江蘇卷2
滿分作文2：
Good afternoon, everyone,
Its my honor to be here to give you a speech. On April 29，2007 the national student sports program was held from 10∶00am~11∶00am in many primary and middle schools all over China. It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program. In Jiangsu, about 11 milloin students took part in the activity.
The theme of this program is “do exercises for one hour per day, work for 50 years healthily and lead a happy life”. In my viewpoint, this is quite good for us senior students. We do exercises one hour a day and we can gain health, which lay a solid foundation for our future. That will be very good. So boys and girls，come and join us now!
Thank you!
名師點(diǎn)評：
文章的結(jié)構(gòu)很清楚，內(nèi)容和要點(diǎn)把握得也比較完整。本文十分符合演講稿的要求，寫得比較出色。第一段中用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句，指出了發(fā)起項(xiàng)目的主體。作者用并列的方式解釋了主題，十分出色。定語從句也用的很好、很到位。
積累卡片：
好詞：1. promote v.促進(jìn)2. foundation n.基礎(chǔ)3. gain v.獲得
好句：1. It is the Ministry of Education that promotes this program.是教育部推動了這個計(jì)劃。
好處：強(qiáng)調(diào)句的使用十分準(zhǔn)確。
2. We do exercises one hour a day and we can gain health, which lay a solid foundation for our future. 每天鍛煉一小時我們的身體就會很健康，而這也為將來打下了堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。
好處：lay a solid foundation，為…打下堅(jiān)實(shí)基礎(chǔ)。
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