An Friend Indeed 一個(gè)真正的朋友
True friends always come to you when their help is in need.They try their best to help you without thinking what they can get from it. This invariably wins them love and respect from otbers, for they devote themselves to the happiness of others.
Up to the time of my writing this article, Aero has been helping me with my selecting the courses with great effort. He is a friendly and zealous guy. I think he has been liked by others since long ago because of his characteristics. He is always brisk,enthusiastic, energetic and he is smiling no matter when or where you see him. However, I like him for some other reason.It seems that between us there is a special way to communicate and it's not the usual way through which we communicate such as words and gestures. He has always been a friend of mine be cause I like the way he acts and lives and the way we communicate.
One morning a week ago, he came to me and asked if he could be of help. Actually I had been worrying about my course of this semester for days since I hadn't got any English courses yet! Still I was totally caught off guard by Aero's offer though he had always been kind. I thought it was my own business and it had never occurred to me that some other inpidual would offer to help with my selecting the courses. So I declined his kindness. The very next day, I got a cough and it later turned out to be a four-day high fever. In those days, I was extremely weak and lay in bed all day long and hardly had any strength even to eat. I lost the power to keep an eye on the possible vacancies of the English courses ever since I got a high fever. I began to regret declining Aero's offer. Just at that moment, Aero called,asking about my health and told me to have a good rest, saying that he would shoulder the responsibility of selecting my English courses for me. Now I am writing this article as the homework of this writing course and I'd like to re emphasize that it is all due to my friend's effort that I have finally made it.
I was really grateful to him when he called and offered to help and it is hard to express my gratitude with words. All I want to say about it is that at that moment, I realized that he had offered to help not because it made him feel he was important but because he meant business. He's a man of integrity. I am proud of having such a friend.
真正的朋友總是在他們需要幫助的時(shí)候來到你的幫助下,他們會(huì)盡力幫助你,而不去想他們能從中得到什么。他們總能贏得愛和尊重otbers,因?yàn)樗麄儼炎约悍瞰I(xiàn)給別人的幸福。
在我寫這篇文章的時(shí)候,航空公司一直在幫我的忙,我的課程很有幫助。他是一個(gè)友好和熱情的家伙。我認(rèn)為他是因?yàn)樗奶攸c(diǎn)而喜歡別人的。他總是很活躍,熱情,精力充沛,他是在微笑,無論何時(shí)何地,你看到他。然而,我喜歡他,因?yàn)橛行┢渌脑?,似乎在我們之間有一種特殊的方式來溝通,這不是通常的方式,我們溝通,如文字和手勢(shì)。他一直是我的一個(gè)朋友,我喜歡他的行為和生活方式和我們溝通的方式。
一個(gè)星期前的一個(gè)早晨,他來問我,問他是否可以幫忙。實(shí)際上,我一直在擔(dān)心我的這學(xué)期的課程,因?yàn)槲覜]有任何英語課程了!盡管他一直很善良,我還是完全被航空公司的報(bào)價(jià)所吸引。我想這是我自己的事,我從來沒有想到過會(huì)有其他人會(huì)幫助我選擇課程。所以我拒絕了他的好意。第二天,我咳嗽了,后來變成了一個(gè)為期4天的高燒。在那些日子里,我非常虛弱,躺在床上整天,幾乎沒有任何力量,甚至吃。我失去了權(quán)力,以保持眼睛的可能空缺的英語課程,自從我得到了一個(gè)高燒。我開始后悔航空公司的報(bào)價(jià)。就在那一刻,航空打來電話,詢問我的健康狀況,告訴我有一個(gè)好的休息,他說他會(huì)承擔(dān)責(zé)任,選擇我的英語課程?,F(xiàn)在,我寫這篇文章作為家庭作業(yè)的寫作課程,我想強(qiáng)調(diào)的是,這是因?yàn)槲业呐笥训呐?,我終于使它。
我真的很感激他,當(dāng)他打電話給他,并提供幫助,這是很難用言語表達(dá)我的感激之情。所有我想說的是,在那一刻,我意識(shí)到,他提供幫助,并不是因?yàn)檫@讓他覺得自己很重要,但因?yàn)樗馕吨髽I(yè)。他是個(gè)正直的人。我為有這樣一個(gè)朋友而感到驕傲。
簡(jiǎn) 評(píng)
作者先寫什么樣的朋友是真正的朋友,然后介紹他就有這樣一位能及時(shí)幫助別人又不圖報(bào)答的好友。
利用選課這樣一件事,作者栩栩如生地刻畫了有血有肉的朋友。真正的朋友會(huì)在你需要時(shí)出現(xiàn)。本文描寫生病后朋友再次打電話問候,并詢問選課事宜。沒有比得到朋友真誠而無私的幫助更令人快慰的事了。
不足之處在于思路欠清晰,段落間缺乏連貫,用詞不夠多樣化。
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