2016年12月大學英語六級作文練習：旅游
Writing
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay, entitled Going on a Package Tour or a Self-tour. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1.有些人喜歡跟團旅游
2.有些人喜歡自助旅游
3.你的看法
范文：
A Package Tour or a Self-guided Tour?
①Whenever people go traveling, they will face a difficult problem of choosing between going on a package tour and going on a self-guided tour. ②People preferring to go on a package tour hold the opinion that you don't have to worry about the schedule, transportation and accommodation, which makes it possible for the tourists to fully keep their minds on enjoying the beautiful scenery and becoming familiar with the local customs. ③And what's more, it is much safer and money-saving than self-guided tour. ④ On the contrary, people who are in favor of a self guided tour argue that they will feel quite free in arranging the schedule of the tour and may stay in their fancy place (destination) as long as they like to enjoy the beautiful scenery, to go shopping, or to enjoy snacks of different tastes, completely without considering the limitation of time. ⑤In addition, self-guided tour may test and improve people's, especially the youngsters' determination, perseverance, confidence and abilities to deal with difficulties.
⑥Therefore, it all depends on what kind of tour one may choose. ⑦If I have enough time and money, I will choose self-guided tour for freedom and flexibility; however, if time is limited and I want to save energy, perhaps I will consider package tour.
解析：
①總述人們在選擇旅游方式上的矛盾，開篇用 Whenever引導讓步狀語從句，讓人眼前一亮。
預覽：
②陳述團隊旅游的優點，綜合運用同位語從句、定語從句等復雜句式，提升文章的檔次。
③用And what's more表示遞進，進一步陳述團隊旅游的優點。
④用On the contrary進行自然過渡，引出對立的觀點，句中綜合使用定語從句、賓語從句排比句式等復雜句式，為文章增色。
⑤用In addition表示遞進，進一步陳述自助旅游的優點，其中determination，perseverance為亮點同。
⑥用Therefore進行過渡，總結全文。
⑦借助however前后對比，陳述個人觀點。
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