英語六級8分作文范文批改1
英語六級待批改作文：
In recent years, psychologically healthy has become quite a serious problem. As for the reasons psychologically healthy, there are many factors contributing to it.
It is conceivable that it has mainly arisen from the two following factors. For one thing, with the speedy development of our society, people will go through many kinds of challenges. Thus, some people often are in pressure. For another, in this day and age, some people feel reluctant to approach. They lack the skill of interpersonal communication.
Taking all the above-mentioned factors into consideration, it is imperative of us to take effective measures to keep psychological healthy. To begin with, we should appeal to authorities to cultivate the awareness of people that keeping psychological healthy is of great significance. For another, people should try to develop the ability of interpersonal communication. Only in this way can we have a brilliant future.
作文批改如下：
In recent years, psychologically healthy（心理健康不是一個嚴重的問題，心理疾病才是問題，此處改為psychological disease）has become quite a(改為a quite) serious problem. As for the reasons (加for)psychologically healthy(同上), there are many factors contributing to it.（題目要求本段寫心理健康問題是導致疾病的主要原因，并不是寫很多原因導致心理不健康，你應該把題目的要求翻譯成英文，在下一段再寫最后一句話）
It is conceivable that it has mainly arisen from the two following factors. For one thing, with the speedy development of our society, people will go through many kinds of challenges. Thus, some people often are in(改為under) pressure. For another, in this day and age, some people feel reluctant to approach(加other people). They lack the skill of interpersonal communication.
Taking all the above-mentioned factors into consideration, it is imperative of us to take effective measures to keep psychological（加ly） healthy. To begin with, we should appeal to authorities to cultivate the awareness of people that keeping psychological(加ly) healthy is of great significance. For another, people should try to develop the ability of interpersonal communication. Only in this way can we have a brilliant future.
同學你好，拿到題目后首先要仔細分析一下題目的要求，六級考試的題目都很明確，首段基本是要將題目原話給翻譯一下，千萬不能跑題。像你寫的這個首段就很容易被認為是跑題。
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