2017年12月英語四級高分范文（九）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Witness of a Theft Incident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)描述你在公共場所目睹的一次扒竊事件2)譴責這種不文明的現象
【思路點撥】本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要求描述一次事件的經過，提綱第2點要求對事件進行評論，由此可判斷本文應為記敘文。根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：交待事件背景;描述扒竊事件的經過和最后結果;譴責這種不文明的現象，提出解決建議。
【參考范文】A Witness of a Theft Incident
Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. The thief was so rampant that it left me a very deep impression。
It was in the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway station. A woman took her purse out and paid for the ticket. Then she put her purse back into her bag and turned to leave, when a mid-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”. She didn’t feel unusual and went into the station. Indeed, her purse had been stolen by that man. To our surprise, the thief seems not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and down. Maybe he was searching for the next target. At that time some persons, including me, witnessed the process. But unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman。
This incident makes me ashamed and leaves me a deep thought. The pickpocket has posed a great threat to residents’ and visitors’ property safety. Undoubtedly, it is an urgent thing to take action to prevent pickpocket. However, it cannot depend on the police only. Instead, it needs our common efforts. We can not shut our eyes and mouths to the pickpocket any more. It should be kept in our minds that our forces are far beyond those thieves。
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