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　　But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.

 

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　　Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.

　　典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：

　　(啟)Paragraph I：(1)引出將要評論的事物或者是觀點; (2)簡明扼要的提出人們在這個問題上的兩種不同看法。

　　Score: 14分

　　How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.(啟)

　　注：第一句提出問題，第二句提出兩種見解

　　典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：

　　(承)Paragraph II：(1)提出一種觀點或優點;(2)本段的支持性分論點;(3)本段總結(可以省略)。

　　Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.(承)

　　注：1. 本段總分總結構

　　2. they argue that = they think that

　　3. with the development of... 隨著……的發展

　　4. what's more 遞進關系，moreover

　　5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的

　　典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：(轉)Paragraph III：(1)承上啟下的過渡句; (2)提出另一種觀點或缺點;(3)本段的支持性分論點(4)本段總(可以省略)。

　　But others may not agree, they emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.(轉)

　　注：1. But 轉折詞(信號詞)

　　2. they emphasize that = they think that

　　3. today's society is not what it was 現代社會今昔非比

　　4. 許多知識 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge;

　　獲取知識 acquire/ get knowledge

　　5. knows nothing→little;he may be useless→he may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉

　　典型的對比觀點選擇題的文章邏輯結構：(合)Paragraph IV：(1)平衡兩種看法;(2)給出自己的觀點。

　　Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.(合)

　　Score: 11分

　　When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.

　　注：結構非常好，可以套用。

　　Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.

　　注：1.“people, who...,”應去掉逗號，改為限制性定語從句。

　　2. as many as bad books 改為 as many as bad ones

　　3. lead us to the wrong way 改為 lead sb. astray

　　4. they suggest that = they think that

　　5. touch 碰(閃光點詞匯：如教材P7：shouldering the responsibility of doing sth. 肩負起責任)

　　But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.

　　注：1. hold 認為 同樣表示“think”的詞還有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain, agree, hold

　　2. the best book 在西方國家是“圣經”的意思

　　3. to know more, to read more 錯誤，中式英語

　　To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.

　　范文22. Is Television a Blessing or a Curse?

　　Now, it is generally accepted that television plays an important part in people’s lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse.

　　注：it is generally accepted that 人們通常認為

　　As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, allows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating. The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into one’s room.

 

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