BEC商務英語高級范文(一)
BEC高級的寫作分為"圖表描述"和"報告撰寫"兩部分。前者對中國考生來說可能是完全陌生的，涉及對數(shù)據(jù)表、餅圖、柱形圖、曲線圖等各種圖表的描述，字數(shù)要求100字以上，時間20分鐘。后者 報告撰寫部分，則體現(xiàn)了BEC考試重實用的指導思想。題目往往就一句話，沒有任何提示項，需要考生在40分鐘時間內(nèi)組織答案和文章。
Report writing Ex 4: Sample answer: (235words)
Reassessment of job satisfaction: SuePearson(PR Dept.)
Introduction
This report sets out to use Workset colours toassess the accuracy of my job description as PRofficer and to suggest a number of changes.
Findings
It is clear that there is a difference between theway the company views the job and the reality as Iperceive it. Firstly, a number of areas which demand a significant proportion of my time arenot mentioned in the official job brief. The segment on the pie chart which provides most causefor concern is the pink sector; this relates to my attendance at a number of meetings which Ican contribute little. Another significant area is the grey segment; this refers to theunscheduled time I spend sorting out computer problems. I feel these activities are hamperingmy core work. As can be seen from the pie charts, the time I spend actively working to meetthe goals agreed with my line manager is less than envisaged.
Conclusions
The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.
Recommendations
I would recommend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset colours.It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart andto investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suitedto these tasks.
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