商務英語句子修改練習
商務英語證書BEC考試近年來被各類涉外企業、部門用來作為招收職員時英語能力的證明;同時也是商務工作人員或英語學習者檢驗、提高英語水平的方式。由于很多即將進入職場的學生或已工作的青年把該證書作為就業、求職的重要砝碼，因此BEC考試也被稱為“商務求職通行證。
例子：
The following sentences are taken from memosthat are not clear or concise.Rewrite them tomake them better.
1.We have come to the decision that it is notpossible for this offer to be accepted by ourcompany.
2.In view of the fact that we will lose a big contractnext year, expenses will have to be cut by ourcompany.
3.In the event of a retailer finding our shirtsunsatisfactory, we should make arrangements for them to be collected and replacements sentwithout delay.
4.In spite of the fact that we are losing orders to our competitors, we have no intention oflowering our prices.
5.The reason why our sales are going down is because of the lack of staff in the promotiondepartment.
參考答案
1. We have decided that we cannot accept this offer.
2. Since we will lose a big contract next year, we must cut expenses
3. If a retailer finds our shirts unsatisfactory, we should collect and replace them withoutdelay.
4. Although we are losing orders to our competitors, we will not lower our prices.
5. Our sales are falling because our promotion branch is under-staffed.
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