范文:Love
「要求」
題目：愛是人類普遍而偉大的感情，請以“love”為題，寫一篇100單詞左右的英語小短文。文章每一段的前一句話已經給出。
Love plays an important part in this world today.
The love between you and your parents is a specials love.
There are other kinds of love.
「范文」
Love
Love plays an important part in this world today. With the increasing modernization of society， relationship between people are becoming looser and looser. It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other. Love is the caring and concern for， and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses. To love and to be loved is the true happiness in life.
The love between you and your parents is a special one. This love， as any other sincere love， must be honest and be shared by both parents and children. The love of parents is a great support in their children's lives. It will remain with them and help them overcome all the difficulties and make them feel secure.
There are other kinds of love. Love between friends， partners， human beings and animals. The power of love makes us endure the difficulties in our lives， even though we may not have the chance to think about it， it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart.
「評語」
該文邏輯清晰，詞語簡練，先從“愛”的普遍意義談起，說到“愛”的含義，“愛”對我們的重要。在第二段里又重點地談了談父母和孩子之間的“愛”，然后結尾處點到了其他種類的“愛”。有序有節，完整精干。
并不是好文章必須追求艱澀的詞語，平易的語言只要運用得當，也會有極好的效果。
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