范文:Autobiography
「要求」
寫一篇自傳,向別人簡明扼要地介紹你自己的基本情況:你的姓名、生日,你家庭的成員,你的學(xué)業(yè)狀況和你的愛好或?qū)淼拇蛩恪U堃?/p>
“Autobiography”為題目,寫一篇100個單詞左右的英語小短文。
「范文」
Autobiography
My name is Wang Lin. I was born in Shanxi, on April 10th, 1976.
I have one elder brother. He is in the military service now because he did not pass the entrance examination for any of the universities last year. I have a younger sister who is twenty years old. My parents work at a university.
At the age of eight I was sent to primary school, and I was one of the top students among 50 classmates. Then I entered Taiyuan Second Middle school in 1990. In 1996 I took part in the Union Exam of Colleges, and became a member of the Computer Dept. of Tsinghua University.
My grades are excellent, and I am especially interested in computer science and foreign languages. Beside, my ambition is to be a computer engineer. I also like to work as an interpreter. To do that I will have to study overseas to improve my language skills. I think it would be a very exciting career. I am looking forward to the future to serve the public and be useful to humanity.
「評語」
寫自己的自傳,最重要的是在短短的一百多個單詞中,別人能夠了解你的基本情況。這篇范文達到了這個要求。剛?cè)腩}時,簡明扼要地介紹了自己的姓名、家庭狀況,然后說明自己的學(xué)業(yè),現(xiàn)在所在的學(xué)校和專業(yè)等等。最后一段里,談?wù)勛约簩淼南敕èD―出國為更好的發(fā)展考慮。既有自己的事實,也有自己的思想,形象很突出。
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