愉快的一天(A Happy Day)
A Happy Day-愉快的一天
【內容提示】
冬天里，一場大雪過后，大地積雪皚皚。這時，假如有人問你最愿意干的事是什么，你的回答十有八九是“打雪仗”。正好，有一個星期五的下午，下課以后你們老師走進教室建議第二天早晨你們上山玩打雪仗游戲，同學們齊聲響應。請你把你們玩打雪仗的情況寫成一篇文章。
【作文示范】
A Happy Day
Winter came and the first snow began to fall. It was early Saturday morning. When I got up and looked out of the window, I saw trees, roofs and the ground all covered with snow. The world seemed to be a vast expanse① of whiteness②. How beautiful!“A heavy snow, a rich harvest.”Peasants must be very happy. I was happy, too, because…. Well, let me tell you.In the previous afternoon, when school was over, our teacher came into the classroom. “Shall we go to the hill and have a snow fight?”she asked us with a smile.“Good!”the whole class shouted cheerfully.
That＇s why I was so happy in the morning.
When we got to the hill, we started making snow balls at once. Suddenly a snow ball hit me in the face. How cold! When I had made enough snow balls, I began to throw them at my“enemies”.
We threw snow balls at each other; we kept laughing and shouting. What great fun! We were children again. We did not stop enjoying ourselves until we could not see each other clearly for the dark.
On our way home, we were still talking about our snow fight. The wind was blowing hard, but we did not feel the cold. What a happy day!
【詞語解釋】
①expanse[iks＇p$ns] n．廣闊（的區域）；浩瀚②whiteness [＇waitnis] n．白；白色
【寫法指要】
文章的引言段寫到“瑞雪兆豐年”，農民高興，自己也高興。接著用插敘的手法寫前一天下午老師的建議。第三段是過渡段。然后，四、五段是打“雪仗”的場面描寫。結尾段寫他們的興奮勁，點題并與標題照應。
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