場所描寫:我們村的敬老院-The Old Folks①Home in Our V.
我們村的敬老院
【內容提示】
開幕開放后，你們村發生了重大變化，建起了一所敬老院。寫一篇文章，描寫其中的情況。主要內容包括：
①敬老院的落成是你們村在對外開放后發生的巨大變化的一個實例。
②敬老院建于1988年。
③敬老院里有100多位老人，最大年齡98歲，最小的68歲。
④沒有子女的老人均可進入敬老院。
⑤敬老院免費提供衣服、食物、房屋和醫療服務。
⑥敬老院里有彩色電視機、洗衣機，還有閱覽室、運動室等。老人們可以盡其所樂。
【作文示范】
The Old Folk＇s①Home in Our Village
Great changes have taken place here since our village opened its door to the outside world and the old folk＇s home is a good example.
The home was set up in 1988 as a result of the rapid development of agriculture and industry in the village. In the home there are more than 100 old people at present. The oldest is 98 years old and the youngest 68. All the childless ②old men and women in our village who are not able to work, can be admitted into the home.
The home provides all the facilities③ for the old folks. Clothing, food, housing and medical care are all free for them. There are color TV sets, washing machines, a reading room and a sports room. The old people can do all kinds of things and enjoy themselves as much as they like.
They lead a happy life in the home.
【詞語解釋】
①folk [f uk] n. 人們
②childless [＇tMaildlis] a. 無子女的
③facility [f ＇sil ti] n. 方便；便利
【寫法指要】
1）本文第二段的主題句出現于段落的末尾，我們把它叫做段尾主題句（a topic sentence at the end of the paragraph）。前面先陳述情況，最后以主題句作總結。
2）第二段倒數第二句最后的“the youngest 68”中省略了“is”。前后結構一致時常可這樣做。
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