中考英語滿分作文:我的同學(xué) My Classmate
請以“My Classmate”為標題寫一篇記敘文
要求：1、主題明確。語言流暢。思路清晰。 2、字數(shù)在100字以內(nèi)。
思路點撥：
寫記敘文要按照事物發(fā)展的客觀規(guī)律敘述，所敘述的內(nèi)容要交代清楚，條理清晰，重點突出，主次分明，詳略得當。
這篇文章也是記敘文，主人公應(yīng)該用第三人稱，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主。本文以主人公為中心線索，以一、兩件事件為重點內(nèi)容去組織材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整個內(nèi)容情節(jié)要合情合理，有真實感，敘述時可按事情發(fā)展的順序進行，同時加以點評。
滿分作文：
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school， he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived， and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom， the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
我的同學(xué)
劉凱是我的同班同學(xué)。他是個好學(xué)生，總是樂于幫助別人。
有一天，在去學(xué)校的路上，他看見一個小女孩過馬路。汽車迅速地向她和女孩嚇壞了，搬來。那輛車差點撞到她。這時劉凱沖到她面前，抓住了她的胳膊。小女孩得救了。她告訴他住的地方，他帶她回家。當劉凱急匆匆地趕到教室時，老師已經(jīng)開始上課了。他告訴老師他遲到的原因。然后他被譽為他做了什么。
學(xué)習(xí)Study 同學(xué)Classmate
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