托福寫作五大錯誤開頭，請避而遠之

常言道“萬事開頭難”，對于托福寫作來說，一個簡約不簡單的開頭可以讓考官眼前一亮，反之則可能從一開始就給考官留下寫作水平不佳的壞印象。那么在托福寫作中有那些容易引起低分的錯誤打開方式呢？下面五個錯誤的托福寫作開頭模式，請一定記得避而遠之。

錯誤開頭一：中式英文人見人暈

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Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life， there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem。 For example， in the city centers of Shanghai， we can always see people mountain people sea there。

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society， there is no fairness in the business world。 For example， I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage。 I believe if a people always do bad things， he will get “baoying”。

錯誤開頭二：廢話連篇不知所云

典型失敗案例

Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting。 I’m very interested in talking about this topic。 Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

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開門見山 直奔主題

In my opinion， it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

Topic 2-Will modern technology， such as the Internet， ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

Ok， this topic is a very good topic。 First， let me tell you a story： I have a friend， he likes go on the internet very much。 Every day， he uses internet to read news or play internet games。 So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh， this topic is surely very important。 Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

錯誤開頭三：語法錯誤慘不忍睹

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Topic-If children behave badly， should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

About this problem， my think is if children behave badly， then parents are not right。 Because teach child is parent’s responsibility。 So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。

錯誤開頭四：觀點模糊態度曖昧

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Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say。 Because I am still very little， only 17， and not married， so this topic is very difficult for me……

錯誤開頭五：偏離主題無軌電車

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Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education。 To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

I think to success， we must have a lot of important qualities。 To have these important qualities， we must learn a lot of things， for example， English， music tools， and etc。 We can learn these qualities from our teachers， our friends and from books。 All in all， we can learn from many places。

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