托福寫作高分必備——25個作文常見病句整理及修改建議
在托福寫作考試中，很多考生會因為自己的托福寫作答題中出現一些病句而使用自己的作文得不到高分。考生因此而失分真的是太可惜了。那么考生在平時考試中經常會遇到哪些病句呢?這里小編為大家整理了25個托福寫作考試中常出現的錯誤句子以及其改進建議，希望大家在考試的時候自己的作文當中不要因為這些錯誤而失分。快來一起學習一下吧。
1. I am not good at maths, but English
改進: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?
改進: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?
3.It is children who clear about their interests.
改進: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介詞是大家在托福寫作中低分的常見病句。)
改進: I agree with the latter idea.
5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
改進: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
改進: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(語義重復也是大家在托福寫作中導致低分的主要原因)
改進：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
8. No one knows all the things.
改進: No one knows everything.
9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
改進: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.
改進: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.
改進: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
改進: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
13. They will learn the bad habits.
改進: They will develop bad habits.
14. In this continued process, people make progress.
改進: In this cycle, people make progress.
15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
改進: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
改進: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
改進: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
改進: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
改進: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.
20. I felt alone.
21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
改進: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
改進: Cigarettes can help you relax.
23. What’s about nonsmokers?
改進: What about nonsmokers?
24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
改進: Why not be a non-smoker?
25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
改進: Everyone has friends in his life.
以上25個句子就是考生在托福寫作考試中經常會用錯誤的句子，已經給出了改進建議，希望大家在備考的時候可以注意到這些，提升自己的備考效率，在托福考試中就不會讓這樣有錯誤的句子出現在你的作文中，從而影響得分了。最后，小編預祝大家托福考試能取得理想的成績。
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