【原創(chuàng)范文】2018年1月13日雅思A類寫作大作文Task 2真題大作文范文

2018年1月13日場的雅思考試已結(jié)束，本場雅思寫作大作文為社會類話題，題目為：Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees are dressed at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. 話不多說，范文自取：

1.雅思寫作大作文范文解析

本題討論雇主是否應(yīng)該只注重職員的工作質(zhì)量，而不是其穿著。題目類型是議論文的一種觀點類是To what extant do you agree or disagree類型，可以采用雙邊討論，也就是5段式作文。特別需要注意的是，題目中需要重點討論的是只注重職員的工作質(zhì)量，而不是為什么雇主不應(yīng)該注重職員的外表穿著。

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2.1月13場雅思寫作真題范文

We now live in a time when people are perhaps more image conscious than ever before due to social media and the influence of airbrushing in everyday life and in the workplace . Therefore, it appears to me that never should employers merely focus on the quality of work, although it is necessary.

Only focusing on the quality of work could indeed boost productivity. For employers, the more productive their employees are, the more profit they will make. In this case, empowering and encouraging employees to improve the quality of work contributes to the greater efficiency and increased income of the company and employers as well. But this also unfortunately takes a heavy toll on the company profitability. For example, when employees wearing casually not formally attend a formal meeting, this will impress colleagues or collaborative partners as a worker who does not show enough respect, thus possibly leading to an unnecessary failure in cooperation.

However, if employers prioritize the output of employees rather than personal, professional appearance, this will also inflict a poor image both on the company and on its employees, especially in service industry. This is mainly because first impressions are crucial in these industries. Wearing a uniform or formal attire not just shows respect for customers and clients, but reveals a high-quality, professional service or products, an effective tactic to gain a positive image as well as customer loyalty. Without it, the image of a company will gradually become worse and meanwhile productivity and profitability will thus decrease as well.

Such unreasonable work style may also pose threats to the shape of employees’ image. Being committed to the quality of work, some employees, workaholics in particular, will spend too much time improving their work performance and then pay less attention to what they should eat, how much they need to exercise and what kind of clothes they had better wear. If this lasts too long, they will suffer a poor self-image and become less confident, particularly in the world where every single individual emphasizes appearance.

In conclusion, irreplaceable as the quality of work is, it is not only driving factor for the development of a company and what employees wear and look in the workplace does matter for customers, employers and themselves.（340 words）范文來自邢睿嬴老師。

3.雅思寫作之文章結(jié)構(gòu)

P1：引入話題+表明觀點(不同意)

P2：承認(rèn)只注重工作質(zhì)量的優(yōu)勢：會給公司帶來更多的利潤。

P3：指出只注重工作質(zhì)量的弊端：會使得公司形象受損。

P4：指出只注重工作質(zhì)量的弊端：會對職員的個人形象造成負(fù)面影響。

P5:總結(jié)：重申觀點

4.雅思寫作之高分話題表達(dá)

Image conscious 注重個人形象的

Airbrushing 修圖

Empower ...to do sth 使能夠(enable的同義詞)

Impress 留下...的印象

Unnecessary 不必要的

Inflict 使遭受(suffer)

Formal attire 正裝

Tactic 策略

Customer loyalty 顧客忠誠度

Self-image 自我形象

irreplaceable 不可取代的

高分結(jié)構(gòu) the more productive their employees are, the more profit they will make. the more... the more...結(jié)構(gòu)

take a heavy toll on . 對...有負(fù)面影響

...,thus possibly leading to an unnecessary failure in cooperation.

非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)做結(jié)果狀語

not just shows respect for customers and clients, but reveals Not just...but (also)的動詞平行

To what they should eat, how much they need to exercise and what kind of clothes they had better wear. 三個賓語從句的平行

irreplaceable as the quality of work is 讓步狀語從句的倒裝

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