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        雅思寫作大作文話題觀點(diǎn)語料庫:保障飲食健康

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        本期雅思寫作語料庫將探討雅思寫作中有關(guān)飲食健康的話題,結(jié)合寫作題庫中的真題全面分析,吃快餐影響健康,那么教育究竟能不能幫助人們改善吃快餐帶來的健康影響呢?請看下文詳解。

        Scientists believe that eating fast food is harmful to one’s health. Some people think that education can help them change that bad habit. Others, however, argue that education does not work.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 科學(xué)家認(rèn)為吃快餐有害健康,有人認(rèn)為教育可以幫助人們改變這個不良習(xí)慣,有人認(rèn)為教育不起作用,討論兩種觀點(diǎn)。(2010年12月11日雅思考試題目 )

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        【名師點(diǎn)評】討論兩種觀點(diǎn),可以使用第一人稱口吻,也可以使用第三人稱口吻。

        【作家立場】保障健康飲食,教育是起到一定的積極作用,但是,健康飲食不能僅僅依靠教育。

        【思路拓展】

        ①青少年是快餐的主要消費(fèi)者,快餐含有過多的糖分、脂肪、熱量,長期食用有害健康。所以,青少年應(yīng)該成為教育的主體。

        ②為了減少快餐對于消費(fèi)者的不良影響,除了教育以外,政府也該承擔(dān)責(zé)任。例如,美國政府已經(jīng)限制肯德基捆綁銷售兒童套餐的商業(yè)行為。

        【范文賞析】

        【首段】背景介紹+ 作家立場

        So prevailing are the fast foods that some teenagers are in the habit eating junk foods nearly every week. From the perspective of some nutritionists, too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat is undoubtedly health-threatening, for fast food, in most cases, is low in nutritional value. People differ greatly in their views as to how to foster wholesome dietary habit. As I see it, educating the public about the dangers of unhealthy eating, regulating baneful sales and food advertisements to children and lowering the price of healthy foods should be used together to help people keep fit.

        【二段】

        Granted, one effective way to promote a healthy diet is to educate people about the potential risks of unhealthy diet. Modern people might opt for healthier meals and snacks if they are taught that fast foods are high in salt, fat and sugar. To illustrate, I myself changed my unwholesome eating habits after watching television programs on how to preserve health. Also, while it is of great significance to educate adult eater, schoolchildren should be main target for education because they are not only in their formative years but also the regular eaters of fast foods.

        【三段】

        In addition to education, other ways to promote healthy eating are not far to seek. First, methods should be adopted to strictly censor those junk food advertisement aiming at children. Meanwhile, bundle sale of children’ meals by giving out gift toys ought to be banned. Virtually, American has already enacted relevant legislations to restrict such sale promotion of KFC and Mcdonald's. Also, it is imperative for the governments to ensure that healthy foods are cheaper so that people could afford to buy the wholesome foods. Imaginably,the decreased price of fresh fruits and vegetable could enable more people to enjoy healthier foods.

        【尾段】

        Overall, education could aid people to change bad eating habits. However, it also works to restrain the improper publicity and sale of fast food restaurant as well as lower the price of wholesome foods

        【原創(chuàng)語料庫】

        1. So prevailing are the fast foods that some children and youngsters are in the habit of eating fast foods nearly every week. 快餐是如此流行,以至于很多孩子或青少年現(xiàn)在有每周幾乎吃快餐的習(xí)慣。

        【拓展】prevailing = prevalent = popular adj 流行的

        2. wholesome = healthy = sound adj健康的

        3. junk foods n垃圾食品

        4. alter one’s dietary habit = change one’s eating habit v 改變一個人的飲食習(xí)慣

        5. be detrimental to health = undermine one’s health v有害健康

        6. is a health-threatening practice v有害健康的做法

        7. be conducive to one’s health = conduce to one’s health = is beneficial to one’s health v有益健康

        8. keep fit = stay healthy v保持健康

        9. is low in nutritional value v營養(yǎng)價(jià)值很低

        10. contribute to obesity = give rise to= overweight = lead to fatness v導(dǎo)致肥胖

        11. bundle sale n捆綁銷售

        12. avoid too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat v避免太多的糖分、脂肪、熱量的攝入

        13. Healthy food should be made cheaper. 健康食品應(yīng)價(jià)格低廉

        14. The advertising of junk foods aiming at children should be reasonably regulated 針對兒童的垃圾食品廣告應(yīng)該被合理規(guī)范

        15. inspire encourage people to eat natural foods v鼓勵人們吃天然食品

        16. foster reasonable and regular dietary habit v培養(yǎng)健康規(guī)律的飲食習(xí)慣

        【拓展】foster = cultivate = develop v 培養(yǎng)

        17. make people have a deeper insight into how to acquire balanced nutrition v 加深人們對于獲得均衡營養(yǎng)的洞察

        18. It is imperative for the government to call on wholesome dietary habit. 號召健康飲食,對于政府而言勢在必行。

        19. personal importance should be attached to the sanitation of eating and drinking 個人應(yīng)該重視飲食衛(wèi)生。

        20. On no account can we ignore the immense value of health management, no matter how busy we are. 無論我們多忙,我們不能忽視健康管理的巨大價(jià)值。

        【拓展練筆題目】

        People should look after their health as a duty to the society they live in rather than personal benefits. Do you agree or not agree? 保持健康是盡到了社會責(zé)任,不是對于個人有益,是否認(rèn)同?

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