2017年9月21日雅思寫作考試小作文范文
雅思task1:The table below shows the percentage of men and women working in several sectors.Compare and contrast.
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本題屬于數據比較多的表格圖形，但是各部分信息分類非常明確。考生在處理此類題目時，需要確定恰當的寫作層次，例如本題建議描述20年間男女百分比趨勢的變化，以及主體段內容的安排。此外，在寫作數值篩選方面，只需突出重點數值即可，例如最高，最低和不變的數值。
The table illustrates how the proportion of male and female workers in four sectors changed between 1990 and 2010.
Referring to men, most of them (25%) worked in manufacturing industry in 1990 but the figure had decreased in the following twenty years, standing at only 10% in 2010. This downward trend was also seen in the rate of male employees in retail and shops, declining from 23% to 8%. On the contrary, there were more and more men finding jobs in tourism, and its percentage almost tripled over this period. In terms of health field, 9% of men were hired both in 1990 and 2000 with an increase of 1% in 2010.
Regarding to women, 23% of them undertook the work related to tourism at the beginning of this period and in next twenty years its percent stabilised at 25%. The similar situation occurred in the figure for retail and shops where 13% of women worked in per ten years. However, meanwhile, the percentage of female staffs in health and manufacturing both had dropped.
Overall, it can be seen that compared with men, more women chose to work in tourism and health industry in the 20-year period.
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