2016雅思寫作范文：環(huán)保類（4）
【能源類】
World’s natural resources such as oil，forests and fresh water are consumed at an ever-increasing rate, what are the causes and how to solve it? 世界的自然資源例如石油，森林，淡水在日益減少，原因何在，如何解決?
解析：at an ever-increasing rate v以愈來(lái)愈快的速度
如何打造高分作文：
蓋樓房：圖紙：謀篇布局 + 思路拓展
原料：精準(zhǔn)詞匯 + 學(xué)術(shù)句型
分析問(wèn)題解決問(wèn)題話題布局圖：
首段：背景介紹(個(gè)性開(kāi)篇) + 問(wèn)題影響(對(duì)于國(guó)家，企業(yè)，個(gè)人)+寫作目的(清晰表達(dá))
二段：?jiǎn)栴}原因的展開(kāi)：(客觀上 + 主觀上)(社會(huì)原因 + 家庭原因 + 個(gè)人原因)
三段：解決策略的展開(kāi)：(政府做;媒體做;企業(yè)做;家庭做;個(gè)人做)
尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn) + 總結(jié)理由(強(qiáng)調(diào)協(xié)調(diào)努力)
【薛鵬點(diǎn)評(píng)】：托福寫作是經(jīng)常提問(wèn)是否……是解決問(wèn)題的最佳的途徑，這就和雅思寫作的分析問(wèn)題及解決問(wèn)題相似了。
例如：The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read newspapers and magazines from that country?Do you agree or disagree?(托福題庫(kù))
假如給我一套模板：
首段：背景介紹 +寫作目的
Never has …… in our community been as severe as it now is. …… is soaring at an alarming rate, for reasons which are not easily explained. This essay will attempt to discover some of the reasons and explore some possible solutions.
填空詞匯：
1. energy crisis n能源危機(jī)
2. various depletion of natural resources n 各種各樣能源的消耗
二段：三個(gè)原因的展開(kāi)：
One the of most contributing factors of …… could be attributed to …… By that I mean, ……Still, …… often exert great negative influence on ……, because……Last, …… is also the root cause of ……，……
三段：解決策略的展開(kāi)：
Considering the seriousness of the issue, it is imperative to implement some practical solutions. First，the government should give priority to ……. More precisely, to enact relevant legislations to……. Further, much emphasis should be put on strengthening publicity, for it will aid us in fostering……. Last, …… must take every step necessary to ……
尾段：總結(jié)全文：強(qiáng)調(diào)協(xié)同努力;
Only when the government, society and every family join hands in resolving the issue will we ……
點(diǎn)評(píng)：政府做;媒體做;企業(yè)做;個(gè)人做……
出題背景：中國(guó)在建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì)的背景下。
【網(wǎng)薛鵬思路拓展】：
1. 需求增加――滿足需求――依賴高科技產(chǎn)品和利用自然能源
2. 意識(shí)缺乏――宣傳教育――提高環(huán)保和節(jié)能意識(shí)
3. 利用不合理――資源浪費(fèi)――合理布局
點(diǎn)評(píng)：水污染;森林砍伐;
【網(wǎng)薛鵬原創(chuàng)語(yǔ)料庫(kù)】：
1. almost uses up the world fuel resources v 幾乎用盡了世界的燃料資源
2. …… lead to energy crisis v導(dǎo)致能源危機(jī)
3. consume the energies and resources v 消耗能源和資源
點(diǎn)評(píng)：主語(yǔ)就是各種交通工具和現(xiàn)代化建筑。
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4. Alarmingly，we, human beings, are now facing a series of resource-related problems such as water scarcity or various depletion of natural recourses although our economy keeps on increasing. 具有諷刺意味的是，盡管我們的經(jīng)濟(jì)在不斷攀升，但是，我們?nèi)祟悈s面對(duì)著一系列和能源相關(guān)的問(wèn)題例如水源短缺以及自然資源的消耗。
【薛鵬點(diǎn)評(píng)】：個(gè)性開(kāi)篇;首段亮劍。
5. Ironically, the history of the development of economic development is also a history of man’s increasing destruction of nature. 具有諷刺意味的是，經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的歷史也是人類不斷破壞自然的歷史。
解析：Ironically adv 具有諷刺意味的是……
6. Alarmingly，the depletion of natural resources has long been a problem of great concern and complaint in many cities around the globe. 在世界上，很多國(guó)家抱怨和關(guān)注的問(wèn)題之一就是自然資源的消耗。
【薛鵬點(diǎn)評(píng)】：切題的開(kāi)篇句
7. To avoid an oil shortage， more productions must harness natural energy such as solar energy，wind energy and tidal energy .為避免油料的短缺,更多的生產(chǎn)應(yīng)該利用自然能源例如太陽(yáng)能，風(fēng)能和潮汐能。
解析：荷蘭的風(fēng)車發(fā)電。
解析：harness v 利用(尤其指的自然能源)
解釋：harness：control and use a natural force to produce electrical power, etc 控制及利用(自然界的力量)以產(chǎn)生電能等:
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