【GRE寫作】6種精選方式讓你的遣詞造句更專業

讓自己的新GRE作文寫的更具有渲染能力，就要靈活運用一些語法和可能簡單的但是很地道的表達方式。GRE作文表現力是取得高分的關鍵，小編為大家整理了一些提高作文詞句水平，讓遣詞造句顯得更加專業的寫作心得，希望對大家的寫作提供有益的幫助。

一、避免使用語意弱的“be”動詞。

1、把句中的表語轉換為不同的修飾語。例如：

Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (轉換為前置定語)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (轉換為并列結構作后置定語)

2、將作表語用的形容詞或名詞變為行為動詞。例如：

1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well.

2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

3、在以“here”或“there”開頭的句子中，把“be”動詞后的名詞代詞變成改寫句的主語。例如：

1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.

2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.

二、多用語意具體的動詞，保持句意簡潔明了。

例如：

1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.Better: She compares prices and quality.

三、盡量運用主動語態。

例如：

1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.Better: Charity has supported the organization.

2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

四、防止使用語意冗長累贅的詞語。

例如：

1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

五、杜絕濫用陳舊詞語或難懂的專業術語。

例如：

1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.

2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

對于還未找到GRE寫作感覺的考生同學來說，通過上文內容學習一些遣詞造句方面的專業技巧，并通過練習熟練掌握，一定能為大家的寫作提分帶來幫助。

TIPS：備考GRE寫作的名言警句

1.Activity is the only road to knowledge.

行動是通往知識的唯一道路。

2.Better be unborn than untaught, for ignorance is the root of misfortune.

與其不受教育，不如不生，因為無知是不幸的根源。

3.If a man empties his purse into his head,no man can take it away from him,an investment in knowledge always pays the best interest.

傾已所有追求知識，沒有人能奪走它：向知識投資，收益最佳。

4.The roots of education are bitter,but the fruit is sweet.

教育的根是苦的，但其果實是甜的。

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