滿分作文 回信,朋友來(lái)旅游 Write back, friends to travel
下面是Li Hua給Zhang Hong的信,請(qǐng)你以Zhang Hong的口氣按提示寫(xiě)一封詞左右的回信.
September 16
Dear Zhang Hong,
How is everything with you I hope things are going well.
There is not much news here.I just go to work every morning and come back to my apartment every night.Shanghai is crowded with people,but I don't really know any of them.I don't like the city,but my job is quite interesting,and the pay is quite good.
What are your plans for National Day If you don't have anything special,I hope you can visit Shanghai.Come and share my apartment.It is quite large and it is near the theatres,museums and stores.
Write soon,and say you can spend the holiday here.
Sincerely yours
Li Hua
回信提示:回信應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:
⑴因故信至昨天才收到;
⑵Li Hua喜歡他的工作,但不喜歡上海,Zhang Hong談自己的看法;
⑶謝絕Li Hua的邀請(qǐng),并說(shuō)明原因;
⑷也向Li Hua發(fā)出來(lái)杭州度假的邀請(qǐng).
【參考答案】
September 25
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter dated September 16.It wasn't until yesterday that I got it,as I had been out on business for a week.
In your letter,you told me that you preferred your job to the city of Shanghai.In my opinion,Shanghai is an exciting and a beautiful place.Try to enjoy yourself in your spare time besides your devotion to work.
I'm sorry to say that I won't go to Shanghai because our school will hold an open-air party.I have to stay for the performances on the holiday.By the way,would you please come and join us in the party Hangzhou is so beautiful in autumn that I'm sure you will like it.
Yours
Zhang Hong(127)
【解題導(dǎo)引】寫(xiě)回信與首次給人寫(xiě)信不同,它必須以別人給你的來(lái)信為基礎(chǔ),展開(kāi)你的寫(xiě)作思路,決不能置他人的來(lái)信于不顧.因此,第一步首先要細(xì)讀來(lái)信并讀懂信的內(nèi)容,包括一些細(xì)節(jié)及信的言外之意.其次要對(duì)來(lái)信所提出的問(wèn)題作出相應(yīng)的反應(yīng),表明自己的態(tài)度和看法,并解釋其原因.最后,寫(xiě)回信者也可以介紹自己方面的新聞或向來(lái)信人提出建議或要求等,這樣"一來(lái)一往"則發(fā)揮了書(shū)信的功能,達(dá)到了相互交流之目的.
另外,在寫(xiě)信中,務(wù)必注意書(shū)信的格式.由于近幾年高考所要求寫(xiě)信的題目均已給出了相應(yīng)的頭,尾,弱化了學(xué)生在書(shū)信這一書(shū)面表達(dá)能力的培養(yǎng).故廣大師生有必要加強(qiáng)書(shū)信中的日期,稱(chēng)呼,結(jié)束語(yǔ),簽名等方面的訓(xùn)練,同時(shí)還要特別注意正文部分的頭尾常用客套話的運(yùn)用.
九月二十五日
親愛(ài)的李華,
謝謝你九月十六日的來(lái)信。我昨天才得到它,因?yàn)槲乙呀?jīng)出差一個(gè)星期。
在你的信中,你告訴我,你喜歡你的工作,在上海市。在我看來(lái),上海是一個(gè)令人興奮的和一個(gè)美麗的地方。試著在你的業(yè)余時(shí)間享受自己除了你專(zhuān)心工作外。
我很抱歉的說(shuō)我不會(huì)去上海,因?yàn)槲覀儗W(xué)校將舉辦一次露天聚會(huì)。我不得不為節(jié)日表演準(zhǔn)備。順便說(shuō)一句,請(qǐng)你來(lái)參加我們的聚會(huì)杭州是如此美麗的秋天,我肯定你會(huì)喜歡它的。
你的
張宏
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