高考英語北京卷滿分作文
第一節(jié) 情景作文（20分）
假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華為響應綠化祖國的號召, 你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹。請根據(jù)一下四幅圖的先后順序, 介紹指數(shù)活動的全過程, 給某英文雜志的"綠色行動"專欄寫一篇以"Green Action in Our Class"為題的英文稿件。
注意: 字數(shù)不少于60。
提示詞: 郊區(qū) suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
四月十二日是值得紀念的，因為我們班在那一天有一次有意義的經(jīng)歷。在早上，我們騎自行車到郊區(qū)植樹，一路上有說有笑。到達后，我們立即開始工作。一些正在挖孔。一些人攜帶和種植小樹。其他被澆水。做完這工作后，我們提出了一個提醒人們保護樹木的董事會。在離開之前，我們拍了一些照片來記錄我們的綠色行動。看到樹木的線條，我們都有一種成就感。我們認為保護和美化環(huán)境是我們的責任。
【名師點評】
本文是設計巧妙的提綱要點式作文，與環(huán)保結合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點連貫，在語言的表達上選詞新穎，同時運用了分詞短語作狀語等較好的句式表達。
第二節(jié) 開放作文（15分）
根據(jù)下面提示, 寫一篇短文, 字數(shù)不少于50.
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it's a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don't need to copy others' ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
一幅有趣的圖畫！一個西方的年輕人，坐在一張桌子上，準備吃一碗面條。他拿著兩把叉子和我們中國人用筷子一樣。他很努力地去撿面條，他很出汗。乍一看，我覺得這有點滑稽，因為我們中國人想當然地認為筷子是吃面條的工具。圖中的人試圖復制我們。顯然，他正在做的很難。也許用一個叉就做一個更好的工作，在我看來，我們不需要模仿別人的思維方式。有時候，一個簡單的做事方式可能是一種更好的方式。
【名師點評】
本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達。考生重點要看出這個人是卷發(fā)高鼻的外國人，要體會到西式刀叉對中式食物的矛盾性。行文結構十分明晰，同時句式使用得熟練而準確。
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