英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文：電視相親節(jié)目（高分評(píng)點(diǎn)）2
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Nowadays, the blind-date show is definitely popular. This kind of show has hooked many pretty, outstanding and(刪除) young people to take part in finding his princess or her Mr.right.. What’s more, the blind-date show has been the enthusiastic topic in our free time.
Why is this kind of show so attractive? On one hand, young people are so busy in working that have no time to meet new friends and develop further relationships. On top of that , maybe someone is quiet strick(改為strict) with the lover ,so he or she will have more chances to meat(改為meet) different kind of people then choose the best one .On the other hand , some youth has the arm of(你是想用aim嗎?) becoming a pop star to join the show instead of dating sincerely .
In my opinion ,the blind -date show provides a new kind of enthusiasm for audience to choose ,(改為句號(hào))it can make our life more colorful and to some degree ,it truly gives some singles a new way to date. However, i hope that the show can be pure and innocent . Fewer lies ,more truths.
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