2017年12月英語四級(jí)寫作真題整體解析

2017年12月四級(jí)寫作真題整體解析

吉林新東方 王蕊

　　本次四級(jí)寫作題目“How to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients/ parents and children/ teachers and students”，主要的提問方向是幾種關(guān)系的解決方式，是一道典型的解決問題型題目。題目?jī)?nèi)容與社會(huì)實(shí)際連接非常緊密，涉及到現(xiàn)在大眾非常關(guān)注并日益緊張的醫(yī)患關(guān)系，親子關(guān)系，以及師生關(guān)系。應(yīng)用課堂講解過的解決問題型寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，可以比較輕松地應(yīng)對(duì)此次四級(jí)考試的寫作題目。

　　寫作時(shí)，首段需要給出背景并引出題目相關(guān)的核心詞(即哪種關(guān)系);其次，可以給出造成目前醫(yī)患關(guān)系，親子關(guān)系，以及師生關(guān)系比較緊張的原因，1-2點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要分析，無需詳細(xì)論證原因。由于題目涉及的主要題目方向是如何最好地解決三種關(guān)系，因此主體段應(yīng)側(cè)重于給出解決辦法。比如，醫(yī)患關(guān)系的解決可以依靠媒體宣傳，醫(yī)療常識(shí)普及等;親子關(guān)系的解決可以通過增強(qiáng)父母對(duì)孩子的了解，一節(jié)加強(qiáng)學(xué)校對(duì)學(xué)生親子關(guān)系的教育來解決;師生關(guān)系，一方面部分教師的職業(yè)素養(yǎng)，一方面提升學(xué)生對(duì)教師工作的了解等。主體段的解決方式1-3個(gè)均可，(如為一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)，就需要給出論點(diǎn)后詳細(xì)解釋或舉例;如為三個(gè)分論點(diǎn)，則簡(jiǎn)要給出論點(diǎn)即可)，注意達(dá)到文章的字?jǐn)?shù)要求。結(jié)尾段，注意總結(jié)主體段給出的解決辦法，可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行倡議和號(hào)召。

　　總得來說，本次四級(jí)寫作題目難度適中，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，能較好地應(yīng)用解決問題型的寫作方法。但最后得分和考生的語言質(zhì)量關(guān)系非常密切，注意寫作時(shí)詞匯和句式的準(zhǔn)確性于豐富性。

　　For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　Currently, the public pour close attention into the relationship between doctors and patients, since it is not uncommon to see the conflicts between the two parties happen.

　　In order to lead the relationship to a harmonious direction, several approaches can be attempted. First, more common knowledge on medical field, such as the risk for taking medicines and having operations can be introduced to citizens, making it more acceptable when emergencies occur. Moreover, the mass media are supposed to exert favorable effects on educating individuals to treat all possible consequences reasonably, for instance, the public-service advertisements on medical treatment can be launched.

　　Overall, it is high time to take measures to handle the tense relationship between doctors and patients. With more understanding and tolerance, the two can get along in a more harmonious way.

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　　For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between parents and children. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　In the contemporary society, in spite of the increase of the public’s living standards, quite a few parents and children share tense relationship. For one thing, many parents are getting busier than ever before with no time to accompany the children. For another, some children concentrate more on electronic products with insufficient communication with parents.

　　In order to lead the relationship to a harmonious direction, a couple of measures can be taken. First, even if there are a host of stuffs for parents to engage to, they should spend regular time with the young to understand them more, for instance, they can set a family day at least once a week. Furthermore, the adolescents are well- advised to control the time on online games and videos; instead, they can spend more time talking with families to promote the understanding, which is likely to eliminate the generation gap.

　　Overall, it is high time that individuals started to cope with the relationship between parents and children. With more understanding and tolerance, the two can get along in a more harmonious way.

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　　For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between teachers and students. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

　　At present, one of the most intriguing issues folks focus on is the relationship between teachers and students, as more contradictions can be found between the two. On the one hand, teachers impose what they believe is right on students. On the other hand, the juveniles always go against the teacher’s requirement with a rebellious heart.

　　In order to lead the relationship to a harmonious direction, several solutions have been figured out. First, for some teachers who do not understand the young’s thoughts well, they are obliged to be taught some scientific and effective approaches in educating the students. Second, the youngsters should be requested to be involved in some educational courses to raise their awareness in respecting teachers. Moreover, parents should also shoulder their responsibility to guide the teenager to treat the relationship with teachers properly and correctly.

　　Overall, it is high time that certain measures were taken to improve the relationship mentioned above. With more understanding and tolerance, teachers and students can get along in a more harmonious way.

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