BEC名師點評作文（9）

　　BEC商務英語考試在現在的考試形式占有重要的地位，當今社會不論是學生還是職場人都在努力的奮斗這提升自己的能力和晉升的空間，那么我們該怎么樣復習好BEC英語呢!

　　我覺得用中文寫一篇高質量的圖表說明文很不簡單，何況用英文，必須對圖表的總體特征、主要對象走勢、最大值、最小值、轉折點等關鍵點做出簡明扼要的陳述。好在說明文相對比較機械，還是有規律可循。我對課堂資料進行了一番整理，總結出一些常用句型和詞匯，背誦了幾篇范文，很快就上手了。下面是一些老師的點評，希望對大家有所幫助。

　　作文題目：

　　You are a key account manager for atelecommunications company. You are going to beout of the office for a week.

　　Write an e-mail of 40-50 words to your client.

　　*telling them how long you will be away

　　*explaining where you will be

　　*suggesting who they can contact while you areaway.

　　Sample:

　　Dear Mr. Pawlak:

　　I will be out of the office for ten days from 18th November. I will be attending theTelecommunications Trade Fair in London. While I am away my colleague Marry Richards will belooking after my clients, please contact her with any questions or problems you may have.

　　網友作文一：

　　To: sarah, abc company

　　Fr: nono, manager for aa telecommunications company

　　Date: Nov. 7th,2008

　　subject: about a week leave for business trip

　　I'd like to tell you that [1] I will be one-week leave for a business trip in England from Nov. 10th to Nov.15th. If you have any problems, don't hesitate to contact with my assistant juliewhose extension number is 555 and she will help you to do the operation.

　　Thanks for your coorperation[2].

　　_________________________________________

　　[1]去掉

　　[2]去掉。 其他地方很好!

　　網友作文二：

　　To : All staff

　　From: Debbie Zhang

　　Subject: Out of office

　　Dear All,

　　I am in the business trip [1] from Nov. 17 2008 to Nov. 21 2008 to attend training ofaccount management meeting in New York headquarters.

　　During this period, I cannot reply your email promptly.

　　For emergence case, please contact below person or call my cellphone: 123456[2]

　　1. Apply case: John, cellphone: 123456

　　2. Reimbursement case: Jenny, cellphone: 123456

　　3. Others: Phoebe, cellphone: 123456 [3]

　　Thanks,

　　Regards,

　　Debbie Zhang

　　_________________________________________

　　[1]I will be away on a business trip.

　　[2]一般出差應該是留下同事的聯系方式一個就可以，手機不用留的。

　　[3]Only one is sufficient enough.

　　網友作文三：

　　To: All staff

　　From: Gloria, Account Manager

　　Date: 12 March,2008

　　Re: Absence[1]

　　Dear staff,

　　I am about to fly to London to take part in an international meeting.So I will be out of theoffice for the whole week commencing 15 March.If you have any problems,don't hesitate tocontact Sandy,my secretary[2].

　　Thank you!

　　_________________________________________

　　[1]Be away from office

　　[2]其余很好!

　　網友作文四：

　　To:Ben,bec company

　　From:Leon,manager of Rain telecommunications company

　　Date:Nov.21th, 2008

　　On account of a business trip[1] in France,i will be out of my office from Nov. 22th to Nov. 28th.Please connect my assistant Miss Janice ,she will help you in my trip time. [2]

　　Thank you.

　　_________________________________________

　　[1]概念不清楚，文章題目要求的理由沒有寫。

　　[2]If you have any problem while I am away, here is her number:

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