大學生英語作文: 大學生占座現象
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)很多大學里“占座”現象十分普遍
2)這種現象會帶來哪些影響
3)你對此的看法
【行文思路】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析該現象帶來的影響，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現象的看法。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述大學生在教室和圖書館“占座”的現象;闡述這種現象帶來的不良影響;談談“我”對“占座”現象的看法。
【高分范文】
Reserving a Seat
We often see there is a table-cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, [1]indicating the seat is taken. This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities. [2]Strangely enough, most of students seem to [3]take this for granted, and few will protest it.
[4]Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for the purpose of better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects. [5]On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests. [6]Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat. [5]On the other hand, reserving a seat [7]violates the rule of fairness. [8]No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you [6]even though many others are eager for that seat.
[9]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, [10]it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior. [5]Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.
【亮點點評】
[1]“表示”，現在分詞短語作伴隨狀語。
[2]“非常奇怪的是”，副詞使用恰當。
[3]“認為…理所當然”。
[4]though引導讓步狀語從句，引出對不良影響的闡述。
[5]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。
[6]even if/ even though引導讓步狀語從句。
[7]“違背了公平原則”。
[8]“no matter +疑問詞”表示“無論，不管”，引導讓步狀語從句。
[9]用于得出結論。considering用作介詞，意為“考慮到，鑒于”。
[10]用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時候了”。
【佳句臨摹】
1.佳句：Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.
臨摹：即使要花費
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